I am lost in a cloudy dusk
With desperate rainy eyes
I am harsh and heartless
With chaos over my crown
I am striving for that serenity
With freezing blood in my heart
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Akhila is the founder and sole contributor of wordsandnotion.com and qualitynotion.com. By profession she is a software Quality and Quantitative data analyst. She is a self motivated life long learner who loves to decode signs from the universe. Her weirdness is totally aligned with her real life stories and thought experiments. She is the author of “Know them, One answer to many questions” (a General Knowledge book) and “I Had a Crush - The 17 Kinks” (A free ebook of 17 short stories)
June 27, 2017 at 6:47 pm
Really? Another poem, Akhi! Adipoli, appol poet okkey varatte.
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June 28, 2017 at 2:06 pm
😍😊..aa “really” yude answer entha ippo parayua?🤔😂
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June 25, 2017 at 3:54 pm
Beautifully written.
Akhila ma’am you never fail to amaze me with your amazing writeups.
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June 28, 2017 at 2:07 pm
Thank you so much akansha
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June 23, 2017 at 7:24 pm
Nicely penned… I can relate with the feelings you express here 😉 Sigh …
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June 28, 2017 at 2:09 pm
Thank you so much…nice to know that you can relate to that
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June 21, 2017 at 10:29 pm
Emotions r expressed beautifully
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June 22, 2017 at 9:26 am
Thanks greesh
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June 21, 2017 at 6:52 am
Beautiful….’desperate rainy eyes’ loved that line…
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June 21, 2017 at 2:32 pm
Thanks a lot maniparna
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June 20, 2017 at 11:40 pm
Hey!! Akhila🙋
Beautiful & deep, love reading these words from your pen👌📝
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June 22, 2017 at 9:33 am
Thanks lot prashant
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June 20, 2017 at 9:27 pm
Striving for serenity the heartfelt emotions of yours in the form of poetry.. Lovely..
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June 20, 2017 at 9:28 pm
Thanks neha…but I Donno whether it’s heartfelt or not as I was trying to write something else and ended up in these few words..maybe my pen cheated me😂
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June 20, 2017 at 9:32 pm
Well your notion has turned out to be a remarkable poetry today..If this is how your pen has cheated you I would like it to cheat you again and over again😃😃
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June 20, 2017 at 9:44 pm
Lol…😂
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June 20, 2017 at 8:05 pm
Pain emanates from this like breath from the lungs. Beautiful
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June 20, 2017 at 9:29 pm
Thanks pradita..you read it perfectly…
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June 20, 2017 at 10:04 pm
You’re welcome 😊
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June 20, 2017 at 7:06 pm
Beautifully expressed.
I guess it is a dark place to be in.
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June 20, 2017 at 9:27 pm
Thanks dear
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June 20, 2017 at 5:10 pm
cool …from a long time friend with new blog 🙂
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June 20, 2017 at 9:26 pm
Thanks.. but who is this long time friend😇🤔
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June 20, 2017 at 9:33 pm
Entha malayala penkuttiye
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June 20, 2017 at 9:47 pm
Actually you made me think of some real travels…manassinte yatra ayirunnu alle..
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June 20, 2017 at 9:59 pm
Haha..Now u might have got how bad my malayalam was..Enaku puriyale
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June 20, 2017 at 10:08 pm
How the comment which I added on someone else blog, appeared in my blog itself..is it the weirdness of wordpress or my carelessness..
and I am not understanding what you could read from that … strange…
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June 20, 2017 at 10:09 pm
Huh..Oh really?Which comment
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June 20, 2017 at 2:48 pm
An excellent poem! It’s impressive that you are able to express deeply in just few lines.
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June 20, 2017 at 9:23 pm
Thanks a lot..sometimes expressing too much won’t serve the purpose..isn’t it
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June 20, 2017 at 10:24 pm
My pleasure. Yes, expressing crisply is an art. This art is beautiful. Otherwise, it appears to be stretching a writing unnecessarily, which makes it boring and irrelevant. 😊
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June 20, 2017 at 2:27 pm
Wow! 😍
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June 20, 2017 at 9:22 pm
Thanks shre😍
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June 20, 2017 at 12:44 pm
Nice, vpiram.com
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June 20, 2017 at 9:22 pm
Thank you
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June 20, 2017 at 12:28 pm
Lovely writing Akhila. I am relating my state of mind to this. At times it becomes the way you have portrayed. 👍🏼👌🏼
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June 20, 2017 at 9:22 pm
Thanks meena…mind is so confusing, no..it goes wherever it wants
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June 21, 2017 at 12:19 pm
Yeah true. Sometimes it doesn’t listen to us.
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June 20, 2017 at 12:09 pm
Awesome piece of writing!
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June 20, 2017 at 9:21 pm
Thanks vandana😊
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June 20, 2017 at 10:08 am
Striving for the serenity
With freezin blood in heart.
😊😇😘
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June 20, 2017 at 10:16 am
Frozen blood may take you to a state of saturation…kozhappayo..😇😂😂
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June 20, 2017 at 10:24 am
Kuzhappam onnum ayeela. But korchude metaphoric aayirnenkil nalle aayinene.
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June 20, 2017 at 10:27 am
Hmm… yes, I agree to that…actually I never intended to write on serenity, was writing something else on those rainy eyes…but even I Donno how it ended up in that way😂
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June 20, 2017 at 10:42 am
Yeahh i know. Sometymes things just hPpen for no reason.
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June 20, 2017 at 12:00 pm
Athanu..
😇
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June 20, 2017 at 12:11 pm
Hehee. Onnum chyan pattillaa😅
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June 20, 2017 at 10:29 am
I really appreciate you being critic in a nice way👏😊
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June 20, 2017 at 10:43 am
A wise man once told me, if yu want to better yuaself learn to take criticism.😇😇
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June 20, 2017 at 12:04 pm
Exactly….hats off to that wise man… but you know, very rarely you can have such an opportunity in this virtual world…
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June 20, 2017 at 12:12 pm
True. Thats why i do my part and try to make it happen.
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June 20, 2017 at 9:42 am
Excellent work, Akhila 🙂 I especially love the line – With desperate rainy eyes. Keep up the good work!
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June 20, 2017 at 10:18 am
Thanks a lot deepika for your kind words…. yeah, those rainy eyes speak volumes
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June 20, 2017 at 1:08 pm
You’re most welcome, Akhila 🙂
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June 20, 2017 at 9:25 am
BAt present I personally feel this poem fits to my mental condition so much….luv it Akhila😁
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June 20, 2017 at 10:24 am
Thank you…happy that you could relate to that…hope you reach that state of serenity soon
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June 20, 2017 at 10:28 am
😘
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June 20, 2017 at 9:14 am
Truly magnificent the way you skillfully used words to portray the intensity of emotions was really impressive, thanks for sharing such a lovely post. According to your convenience please do read some of my writings would love to know what you think about them 😊
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June 20, 2017 at 10:28 am
Thanks sidharth for your inspirational words.. will check your posts soon
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June 20, 2017 at 12:17 pm
Thanks for respecting my invitation, please feel free to explore any of my poems looking forward to hearing from regarding what you think about my writings 😊
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June 20, 2017 at 9:02 am
Beautiful, Akhila. ❤🙈
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June 20, 2017 at 10:28 am
Thanks sumit…😊
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