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Serenity

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I am lost in a cloudy dusk

With desperate rainy eyes

I am harsh and heartless

With chaos over my crown

I am striving for that serenity

With freezing blood in my heart

Author: Akhila

Akhila is a self-motivated life-long learner and a self-published author.. She posts technical articles on her blog qualitynotion.com. She runs a personal blog, wordsandnotion.com where she writes about everything from illusion to reality.

62 thoughts on “Serenity

  1. Really? Another poem, Akhi! Adipoli, appol poet okkey varatte.

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  2. Beautifully written.
    Akhila ma’am you never fail to amaze me with your amazing writeups.

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  3. Nicely penned… I can relate with the feelings you express here πŸ˜‰ Sigh …

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  4. Emotions r expressed beautifully

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  5. Beautiful….’desperate rainy eyes’ loved that line…

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  6. Hey!! AkhilaπŸ™‹
    Beautiful & deep, love reading these words from your penπŸ‘ŒπŸ“

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  7. Striving for serenity the heartfelt emotions of yours in the form of poetry.. Lovely..

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  8. Pain emanates from this like breath from the lungs. Beautiful

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  9. Beautifully expressed.
    I guess it is a dark place to be in.

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  10. cool …from a long time friend with new blog πŸ™‚

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  11. An excellent poem! It’s impressive that you are able to express deeply in just few lines.

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  12. Nice, vpiram.com

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  13. Lovely writing Akhila. I am relating my state of mind to this. At times it becomes the way you have portrayed. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘ŒπŸΌ

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  14. Striving for the serenity
    With freezin blood in heart.
    πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‡πŸ˜˜

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  15. Excellent work, Akhila πŸ™‚ I especially love the line – With desperate rainy eyes. Keep up the good work!

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  16. BAt present I personally feel this poem fits to my mental condition so much….luv it Akhila😁

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  17. Truly magnificent the way you skillfully used words to portray the intensity of emotions was really impressive, thanks for sharing such a lovely post. According to your convenience please do read some of my writings would love to know what you think about them 😊

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  18. Beautiful, Akhila. β€πŸ™ˆ

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