Words and Notion

Words Whipping up Whimsical Waves of Notion

Serenity

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I am lost in a cloudy dusk

With desperate rainy eyes

I am harsh and heartless

With chaos over my crown

I am striving for that serenity

With freezing blood in my heart

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Author: Akhila

I am flying across the space between words and whipping up whimsical waves of notion to discern the quantum code of my soul.

62 thoughts on “Serenity

  1. Really? Another poem, Akhi! Adipoli, appol poet okkey varatte.

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  2. Beautifully written.
    Akhila ma’am you never fail to amaze me with your amazing writeups.

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  3. Nicely penned… I can relate with the feelings you express here πŸ˜‰ Sigh …

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  4. Emotions r expressed beautifully

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  5. Beautiful….’desperate rainy eyes’ loved that line…

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  6. Hey!! AkhilaπŸ™‹
    Beautiful & deep, love reading these words from your penπŸ‘ŒπŸ“

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  7. Striving for serenity the heartfelt emotions of yours in the form of poetry.. Lovely..

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  8. Pain emanates from this like breath from the lungs. Beautiful

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  9. Beautifully expressed.
    I guess it is a dark place to be in.

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  10. cool …from a long time friend with new blog πŸ™‚

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  11. An excellent poem! It’s impressive that you are able to express deeply in just few lines.

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  12. Nice, vpiram.com

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  13. Lovely writing Akhila. I am relating my state of mind to this. At times it becomes the way you have portrayed. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘ŒπŸΌ

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  14. Striving for the serenity
    With freezin blood in heart.
    πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‡πŸ˜˜

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  15. Excellent work, Akhila πŸ™‚ I especially love the line – With desperate rainy eyes. Keep up the good work!

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  16. BAt present I personally feel this poem fits to my mental condition so much….luv it Akhila😁

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  17. Truly magnificent the way you skillfully used words to portray the intensity of emotions was really impressive, thanks for sharing such a lovely post. According to your convenience please do read some of my writings would love to know what you think about them 😊

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  18. Beautiful, Akhila. β€πŸ™ˆ

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