ഞാനെന്ന സത്യം

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54 responses to “ഞാനെന്ന സത്യം”

  1. fairykumar Avatar

    😁😁😂😂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      i know why you are laughing…;)

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      1. fairykumar Avatar

        Right 😁😁😘

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  2. skd Avatar

    kalakkeettta! ithokke evide vachirikkayaanu…poratte….poratte! 😉

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      lol..;)

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  3. NiVeD Avatar

    Nice

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Nived

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  4. pins & ashes Avatar

    Njaaan! Minukki pidipicchu! Hmm ..

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      ehh.. eppo…;)

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      1. pins & ashes Avatar

        Chumma repeat cheythathanne koche! Your words ..

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  5. Ambu R Nair Avatar

    അഖിലാ ജീ താങ്കളുടെ കവിത തന്നെയാണോ ഇത്? ഉഗ്രനായിരിക്കുന്നു. ഞാനെന്ന സത്യം, മലയാളത്തിലെഴുതിയത് നന്നായി, കാരണം മാതൃഭാഷയിലേ മനുഷ്യന്റെ യഥാർത്ഥങ്ങളെ ഉൾക്കൊണ്ട് പറയാനാകൂ… ഇനിയും മലയാള കവിതകൾ പ്രതീക്ഷിക്കുന്നു.👌

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Ambu…you are right..sometimes in mother tongue only we can express those words deep from heart..

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  6. King Kuttuz Avatar

    Bayankara sahithyam anallo chechy !!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      jeevithamoru sahithyakalariyalle aniya…

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      1. King Kuttuz Avatar

        Appo athreyekkum bore akkano..🤔

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  7. unsaid words Avatar

    Again you wrote in malyali 😦 without hindi version

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      shhhhhh…. Ami with a loaded gun…run akhila…

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      1. unsaid words Avatar

        😦 hahaha na na not like that but I feel helpless when I can’t comment on your posts

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          leave this, until someone translate this. but there is a specific post demanding your words…check it out under the women category in my blog

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          1. unsaid words Avatar

            Yeah sure 🙂

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  8. novelistbaba Avatar
    novelistbaba

    i can’t read this……and i hate to not be able to…….because i know this will be beautiful. 🙂 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      yes, it is beautiful. let me tell myself as long as you cannt read it..;)

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      1. novelistbaba Avatar
        novelistbaba

        Hehe…….no you are good with words……..and i have a follow up…..google failed to translate this! 🙂 🙂

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          oh..you have a follow up.. i need to be cautious that there are someone trying to translate this, definitely not me..
          i am too bad in translating emotions…

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          1. novelistbaba Avatar
            novelistbaba

            Well how would i know that ….so how about you translate this and then we will see……

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              okay.. will let you know…

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              1. novelistbaba Avatar
                novelistbaba

                😀 😀 i knew that would work!!! 🙂

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  9. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

    beautifully written poem, akhila… cheers

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thank you hari….may i tell one thing, instead of positive comments, it’s high time that you should reveal your critic style too 😉

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      1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

        you know i could be severely critical, starting with a ‘but’….but may I tell you some thing, it feels really nice to get a positive comment. btw, this poem was exceptionally nice(in my perception), akhila

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          ya, i know that your but is a kind of disagreement..but never did i feel it in critic way..lol, may be your way of saying ‘no’ in a polite way…really an art..
          as you said, it’s nice to get positive comments..but it’s also puzzling like how could something be so nice…

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          1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

            hmmm…interesting thought, ‘how could something be so nice’?
            yes, that ‘but’ is perhaps my way of a polite …(idea for my next post – the art of telling no??)
            let me comrade, continue admiring the creative efforts of great guys like you…but

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              you must write that post…you only can write that…

              again, but… this time what happened..?

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              1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

                this ‘but’ was just to tease ma’am akhila…..
                but..

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  oho.. pinneyum….enne oru nagavalliyakkum..

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                  1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

                    hahaha… but seriously, this poem was really good, sakhave!! aduthathu varumbo ente thani niram kaanam

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                    1. Akhila Avatar

                      sheri, sammathichu..”this one was damn beautiful” 😉

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                    2. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

                      Entammo…ithendoru…..

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                    3. Akhila Avatar

                      😜

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  10. Abdul Afeef Avatar

    ഉഷാര്‍.. (y)

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thank you.. what is that y in brackets..?

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      1. Abdul Afeef Avatar

        like button 🙂

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  11. aishahnaaz Avatar

    Whoa!! I respect those who write this superb in Malayalam!!! Can’t be more beautiful and meaningful than this! Perfect one akhila Chechi. 🙂 💖

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks my little sis….innale ratriyil undaya ulviliyanu…;)

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  12. cp_chithra_cp Avatar

    Adipoli!!! 😊 Super kavitha! Try to do it in English too..😄

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      athu matram ennodu parayalle ente chithre…mumpokke njan translate cheythathokke van kulamayatha..
      angha… can you give a try dear..? i am very bad in translating emotions…

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      1. cp_chithra_cp Avatar

        Oh..you want me to try translating this malayalam poem of yours to English?? Time venam keto..😁😁

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          etra time venelum edutho…please give a try…

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          1. cp_chithra_cp Avatar

            Sure!! My pleasure!! 😊😊😍

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  13. Masoom Jethwa Avatar

    Wish to see the translation soon. 🍩🍪

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      i too wish..i am leaving it to mallu readers. i will spoil it if myself do the translation..;)

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      1. pins & ashes Avatar

        Hahaha!

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          ;)…you are the one who made me realize this bitter fact… sigh..

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          1. pins & ashes Avatar

            Oooopsy!

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