Words and Notion

Words Whipping up Whimsical Waves of Notion

Emotional Edges

30 Comments

Frantic buzzing echoing in ears

Tempting to ignore the rhythm of routine

Waves of worries dancing around

Drawing to fall in the pool of uncertainties

The stubborn heart trying hard

To stop the nerves from breaking n bleeding

Lips weaving a forged smile

To bring her back from the emotional edges.

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Author: Akhila

An emotionally colored and emotionally neutral woman flying across the space between words and whipping up whimsical waves of notion to discern the quantum code of her soul.

30 thoughts on “Emotional Edges

  1. Wow, Akhi! I had read this one and even commented on it, but wonder where the comment disappeared. The poet in you is wide awake, appol poetry undalley? Okkey pooratte.

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  2. This poem has so much rhythm. It almost feels like it is dancing all alone! Great job!

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  3. The stubborn heart trying so hard ..wonderful poem Akhila

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  4. I hope all got success in the end. Is she back???

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  5. That’s superb Akhila! You should right more poems!!

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  7. Beautifully written πŸ‘Œ I

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  8. It’s beautiful.! Lovely!

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  9. This one is beautiful!

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