നിശാശലഭം

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വെട്ടം തെളിച്ചു ഞാനിന്നലെ-

യെന്‍ ദൈവങ്ങള്‍ക്കു കൂട്ടായ്.

അന്നേരമെന്‍ കണ്‍മുന്നില്‍ വന്നു

പതിച്ചാ, ദീപത്തിനുള്ളിലാ-

യൊരു പാവമാം നിശാശലഭം.

ഇനിയുമുരുകാത്ത നെയ്ത്തിരി

തന്നോരത്തായ് കര കയറാന്‍ വഴി-

യില്ലാതുഴന്നൊരു മിണ്ടാപ്രാണി.

പൊള്ളുമെന്നോര്‍ത്തില്ലന്നേരം ഞാന്‍

നീട്ടിയ വിരല്‍ത്തുമ്പിലേറിയാ ശലഭം

വീണ്ടുമൊരു പുതുലോകത്തിനായ്.

 

56 responses to “നിശാശലഭം”

  1. G.Radhakrishnan Poonthura Avatar

    Hridyam…☺

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  2. fairykumar Avatar

    I want the translation😢😢

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      he he.. translation, i wont do.. if i do that, you people will kick me out of the blogging world.. because of the “excellence ” in my translation of emotion..

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      1. fairykumar Avatar

        Hehe!!!
        Okay, then I will wait till the time I learn this interesting language.😊

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          in some of my earlier comments, i had explained it in brief.. may not be the actual translation..

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          1. fairykumar Avatar

            Alright, will read it!

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  3. anand Avatar
    anand

    Beautiful

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thank you..are you a serial liker…;)

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      1. anand Avatar
        anand

        Hahaa .. Nahh .. who knows what future awaits 😂😂😂😋😋

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          i meant continuous liker..

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          1. anand Avatar
            anand

            Ohh I misspelled.. not actually .. why you think so??

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              oh…simply finding you liking my posts continuously..

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              1. anand Avatar
                anand

                Hahaa .. just went through them as I was not here for sometime .. 🙂

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  4. Shalini Sharrma Avatar

    Beautiful this bell is 🙂
    And in order to understand what’s in the words, i searched 15 mins for this sup you mentioned in your earlier comments 😛 Finally, i got it and surely an act of good deed you did ! Keep up the good karma !

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      he he…thanks dear.. dont complement me like this, i feel a little shy.. he he

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      1. Shalini Sharrma Avatar

        Haha.. Shy Akhila 😛

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          he he..lol

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    2. Akhila Avatar

      bell says ‘thanks’ to you.. the bell belongs to my pooja room

      Like

  5. shilpamohan5 Avatar

    Chechee.. Simple but really beautiful…😍great that u saved a life😊

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      ayyayyo.. enneyangu kollu.. i am going to delete that comment given to sup..

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      1. shilpamohan5 Avatar

        Haha…😂😂😀deletandaaaa😣

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          he he

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  6. Nisthur Anadi Avatar
    Nisthur Anadi

    I don’t know what should I say ? Don’t understand the language.

    All the very best for this post.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks a lot..you will get the essence if you can read my reply to Sup

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      1. Nisthur Anadi Avatar
        Nisthur Anadi

        Ok let me read !😊

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          as aswahy tells, i am very bad in converting emotions from one language to another…so i didnt take an attempt. instead just explained the content in brief as sup demanded.

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          1. Nisthur Anadi Avatar
            Nisthur Anadi

            That’s tough job to convert any emotion from mother tongue to any other language.

            I can understand. Difficult to choose words, flow, sentiments. Soul of the emotion missed in translation.

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  7. pins & ashes Avatar

    pollumenorthakathe oru mindapraniye rakshichu.. kollallo.. ethu hai, ethu viral? type okke cheyyan pattunundalo?

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      not a big deal..just a small incident as well as a small accident..but those lines danced around me that night..so why not post it..

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      1. pins & ashes Avatar

        Sathaym

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  8. theonlysup Avatar

    Nice because ur writing are generally good. 😦 smiley because no translation provided

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      ha ha.. that’s a blind complement..

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      1. theonlysup Avatar

        What else can I say since I do not understand malayalam writing 😦

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          true..and i am really thankful to you as you had the patience and care to comment on the same..

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          1. theonlysup Avatar

            Thank u 🙂 please brief me on the poem in the simplest way

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              oh..two days back i was lighting the lamp in my pooja room. somehow a small insect fell into the lamp. Found it struggling to escape. I had nothing other than my hands to save it. Even though my hands were a little burnt, the insect was safe and flew away.. that’s all

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              1. theonlysup Avatar

                Ah nice.. That’s all we can do.. 🙂 u might have described it nicely in ur mother tongue..

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  hmm.. i feel more comfortable while i note it down in my mother tongue

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              2. pins & ashes Avatar

                ente koche… athinte oru bhavanayil angleya bashayail ezhuthu.. 🙂

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  sorryy..malayalathil ezhuthan paranjal njan ezhutham, engish l ezhuthan paranjalum ezhuthumm.. but never ask me to mix both/translate one to other…bhagyathinu he didnt ask me to translate it, he just asked me to explain it briefly..lucky me..hehe

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                  1. pins & ashes Avatar

                    Athe a the rakshapetuuu

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              3. Nisthur Anadi Avatar
                Nisthur Anadi

                Wow that’s beautiful.
                You saviour of little creature.

                You did excellent job.

                Converting into poem , that’s very sensitive part of you.

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  oh.. no.. nothing big as such..anyway, that night i wrote this

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                  1. Nisthur Anadi Avatar
                    Nisthur Anadi

                    Beautiful incident indeed

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  9. Sanjay M Bhaskar Avatar
    Sanjay M Bhaskar

    Good poem😊

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks sanjay..I am glad that you liked it..

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      1. Sanjay M Bhaskar Avatar
        Sanjay M Bhaskar

        You are welcome☺

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  10. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

    Hey SV Akhila ma’am…. nice poem. paavam nisha shalabham! pinne, one question

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      nisa salabhathinodano sympathy, ente kai polliyathu vishayamalle..;)

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      1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

        athayirunnu njaan chodikkan vanne(one question) – kai polliyo??

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          oho.. not much..a little..

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          1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

            haha..cheriya pollalukal nallatha. later, they act as gentle reminders!!

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              hm…reminder of a soothing memory

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              1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

                yes ma’am akhila…

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  11. Sreejith Nair Avatar

    Good read, Akhila 🙂

    Nice one to start the day with 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Sreejith.. it was something happened a few days back..

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