Words and Notion

Words Whipping up Whimsical Waves of Notion

Diamond necklace

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A diamond necklace adorned me

Awesome, my mirror called me

Overwhelmed in proudness

Enjoyed the envious eyes around me

Until I found two blind eyes staring at me

Was it my own soul, masked under blindness?

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Author: Akhila

Flying across the space between words and whipping up whimsical waves of notion to discern the quantum code of my soul.

92 thoughts on “Diamond necklace”

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  1. thewritewomanblog
    October 22, 2017 at 7:50 pm

    Oh the sparkle of the diamond mars the fact that this is just another ‘material’ that will diminish with time.

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  2. mywords331
    October 19, 2017 at 7:43 pm

    Happy Diwali to you and your family Akhila di😄😄

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  3. iamabloggertoo
    October 10, 2017 at 2:27 pm

    A creatively written poem 🙂

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  5. Moushmi Radhanpara
    October 8, 2017 at 4:13 pm

    Sometimes we are just blinded by materialism.
    Very well written dear.

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  6. Prajakta
    October 7, 2017 at 11:41 pm

    Whoa! This was deep at so many levels 🙂

    Although, it is okay to flaunt it at times…

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  7. Varsh
    October 7, 2017 at 1:54 pm

    Come on, it isn’t criminal to flaunt something and enjoy the attention. Just that one must know that their worth is more than some piece of jewellery.

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  9. ravisidula
    October 7, 2017 at 10:52 am

    Beauty lies in the eyes of beholder. Leave alone a blind person, if i take the same diamond neclace to toddler and an ice cream in other hand, they would chose the later. Perspectives of life – its all about what our hearts desire 🙂

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  10. kalyansparks
    March 14, 2017 at 11:09 pm

    Soul laughed after a minute,
    And after that every cell in body ,
    Laughed heavily following soul
    Then mind said ” darling,what’s the cost of necklace in heaven”

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  11. writeshefali
    November 12, 2016 at 9:38 pm

    The glitter that blinds the soul… lovely n meaningful lines Akhila ☺️👍

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  12. fairykumar
    June 17, 2016 at 8:26 pm

    It’s just amazing!!

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  13. shilpamohan5
    June 17, 2016 at 4:47 pm

    Loved the end..go on writing dear 😊

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  14. Sumith Babu
    June 17, 2016 at 3:52 pm

    Wonderful, keep going Akhila.

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  15. Shalini
    June 17, 2016 at 12:02 pm

    Wow… nice way to put soul as 2 blind eyes 😀

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  16. Megha Agrawal
    June 17, 2016 at 12:46 am

    You always manage to write something thought provoking…

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  17. davekingsbury
    June 16, 2016 at 10:51 pm

    Nice ambiguity in the last line!

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  18. Ranjini
    June 16, 2016 at 7:49 pm

    Food for thought. A very deep, thought provoking one in a few words. 🙂

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  19. Mann Kaundal
    June 16, 2016 at 6:28 pm

    What do you think?
    It wasn’t me, I know for sure. 😉

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  20. Such Different Skies
    June 16, 2016 at 5:09 pm

    You made me to think about the reality of this world..wonderful as always! 🙂

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  21. hasmeetwrites
    June 16, 2016 at 3:37 pm

    Hard-hitting! reality of today’s world! Too good 🙂

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  23. voiceofastranger
    June 16, 2016 at 3:00 pm

    Beautiful poem..”Was it my own soul, masked under blindness?” this lines are par excellence ..:)

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  24. Ashish kumar
    June 16, 2016 at 12:17 pm

    Beautiful… Both the necklace and the poem… 🙂

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  25. myheartbeats4ublog
    June 16, 2016 at 11:58 am

    …look thru the veil of blindness, you may just find the soul wearing that diamond necklace!!!

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  27. jacquelineobyikocha
    June 16, 2016 at 10:33 am

    Woah! What an ending. Fantastic

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  28. avinamdar
    June 16, 2016 at 10:32 am

    Wonderful poem! I like the twist at the end, makes one think 😉👍

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  31. theonlysup
    June 16, 2016 at 9:17 am

    Do u really need a diamond necklace and a mirror to tell how beautiful your soul is ??

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  32. pins & ashes
    June 16, 2016 at 9:14 am

    hmm! ippol entha paraya! inthinu oru uttaram..

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