Words and Notion

Words Whipping up Whimsical Waves of Notion

Diamond necklace

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A diamond necklace adorned me

Awesome, my mirror called me

Overwhelmed in proudness

Enjoyed the envious eyes around me

Until I found two blind eyes staring at me

Was it my own soul, masked under blindness?

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Author: Akhila

Flying across the space between words and whipping up whimsical waves of notion to discern the quantum code of my soul.

92 thoughts on “Diamond necklace

  1. Oh the sparkle of the diamond mars the fact that this is just another ‘material’ that will diminish with time.

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  2. Happy Diwali to you and your family Akhila diπŸ˜„πŸ˜„

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  3. A creatively written poem πŸ™‚

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  4. πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™ deep

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  5. Sometimes we are just blinded by materialism.
    Very well written dear.

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  6. Whoa! This was deep at so many levels πŸ™‚

    Although, it is okay to flaunt it at times…

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  7. Come on, it isn’t criminal to flaunt something and enjoy the attention. Just that one must know that their worth is more than some piece of jewellery.

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  8. Beauty lies in the eyes of beholder. Leave alone a blind person, if i take the same diamond neclace to toddler and an ice cream in other hand, they would chose the later. Perspectives of life – its all about what our hearts desire πŸ™‚

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  9. Soul laughed after a minute,
    And after that every cell in body ,
    Laughed heavily following soul
    Then mind said ” darling,what’s the cost of necklace in heaven”

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  10. The glitter that blinds the soul… lovely n meaningful lines Akhila β˜ΊοΈπŸ‘

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  11. It’s just amazing!!

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  12. Loved the end..go on writing dear 😊

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  13. Wonderful, keep going Akhila.

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  14. Wow… nice way to put soul as 2 blind eyes πŸ˜€

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  15. You always manage to write something thought provoking…

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  16. Nice ambiguity in the last line!

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  17. Food for thought. A very deep, thought provoking one in a few words. πŸ™‚

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  18. What do you think?
    It wasn’t me, I know for sure. πŸ˜‰

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  19. You made me to think about the reality of this world..wonderful as always! πŸ™‚

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  20. Hard-hitting! reality of today’s world! Too good πŸ™‚

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  21. Beautiful poem..”Was it my own soul, masked under blindness?” this lines are par excellence ..:)

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  22. Beautiful… Both the necklace and the poem… πŸ™‚

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  23. …look thru the veil of blindness, you may just find the soul wearing that diamond necklace!!!

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  24. Woah! What an ending. Fantastic

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  25. Wonderful poem! I like the twist at the end, makes one think πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

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  26. Do u really need a diamond necklace and a mirror to tell how beautiful your soul is ??

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  27. hmm! ippol entha paraya! inthinu oru uttaram..

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