A diamond necklace adorned me
Awesome, my mirror called me
Overwhelmed in proudness
Enjoyed the envious eyes around me
Until I found two blind eyes staring at me
Was it my own soul, masked under blindness?
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Akhila is the founder and sole contributor of wordsandnotion.com and qualitynotion.com. A self motivated life long learner who loves to decode signs from the universe. Her weirdness is totally aligned with her real life stories and thought experiments. She is the author of “Know them, One answer to many questions” (a General Knowledge book) and “I Had a Crush - The 17 Kinks” (A free ebook of 17 short stories)
October 22, 2017 at 7:50 pm
Oh the sparkle of the diamond mars the fact that this is just another ‘material’ that will diminish with time.
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October 23, 2017 at 2:31 pm
True that…
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October 19, 2017 at 7:43 pm
Happy Diwali to you and your family Akhila di😄😄
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October 23, 2017 at 2:00 pm
Thanks Neha.. hope you had a nice celebration time
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October 26, 2017 at 8:14 am
You are welcome mam.
Yeah, I had great time with family.
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October 10, 2017 at 2:27 pm
A creatively written poem 🙂
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October 11, 2017 at 5:06 pm
Thanks a lot…
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October 8, 2017 at 6:03 pm
💙💙💙 deep
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October 11, 2017 at 5:09 pm
Thanks Arun
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October 8, 2017 at 4:13 pm
Sometimes we are just blinded by materialism.
Very well written dear.
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October 11, 2017 at 5:10 pm
Thanks moushmi….sometimes we are blinded, but some other times we become self critic too
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October 7, 2017 at 11:41 pm
Whoa! This was deep at so many levels 🙂
Although, it is okay to flaunt it at times…
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October 11, 2017 at 5:13 pm
Thanks Praja…liked your consolation statement
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October 7, 2017 at 1:54 pm
Come on, it isn’t criminal to flaunt something and enjoy the attention. Just that one must know that their worth is more than some piece of jewellery.
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October 11, 2017 at 5:16 pm
Wow….the best words varsha…. the self critic in me is mouth shut on hearing this
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October 7, 2017 at 11:26 am
Awesome words of truth, Akhila
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October 11, 2017 at 5:20 pm
Thank you so mch
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October 11, 2017 at 6:57 pm
Welcome dear.
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October 7, 2017 at 10:52 am
Beauty lies in the eyes of beholder. Leave alone a blind person, if i take the same diamond neclace to toddler and an ice cream in other hand, they would chose the later. Perspectives of life – its all about what our hearts desire 🙂
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October 11, 2017 at 5:21 pm
Valid point…when the perspectives change, the value also gets changed
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March 14, 2017 at 11:09 pm
Soul laughed after a minute,
And after that every cell in body ,
Laughed heavily following soul
Then mind said ” darling,what’s the cost of necklace in heaven”
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March 15, 2017 at 9:47 am
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣…
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March 15, 2017 at 11:30 am
Yup
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November 12, 2016 at 9:38 pm
The glitter that blinds the soul… lovely n meaningful lines Akhila ☺️👍
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November 13, 2016 at 10:49 am
thanks Shef..
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June 17, 2016 at 8:26 pm
It’s just amazing!!
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June 17, 2016 at 8:27 pm
Thank you dear
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June 17, 2016 at 8:28 pm
Your welcome😊😊
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June 17, 2016 at 4:47 pm
Loved the end..go on writing dear 😊
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June 17, 2016 at 8:18 pm
Thanks a ton shilpa
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June 17, 2016 at 3:52 pm
Wonderful, keep going Akhila.
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June 17, 2016 at 4:03 pm
thank you..cheers
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June 17, 2016 at 12:02 pm
Wow… nice way to put soul as 2 blind eyes 😀
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June 17, 2016 at 1:37 pm
thanks dear.. have a good day
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June 17, 2016 at 12:46 am
You always manage to write something thought provoking…
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June 17, 2016 at 9:20 am
thanks Megha.. my thoughts are driving me..
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June 16, 2016 at 10:51 pm
Nice ambiguity in the last line!
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June 16, 2016 at 10:52 pm
😊😊 Thank you so much
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June 16, 2016 at 7:49 pm
Food for thought. A very deep, thought provoking one in a few words. 🙂
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June 16, 2016 at 10:55 pm
Thanks a ton dear ranjini. I’m so glad that you liked it
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June 16, 2016 at 6:28 pm
What do you think?
It wasn’t me, I know for sure. 😉
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June 16, 2016 at 10:57 pm
Ha ha…really liked this…laughing
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June 16, 2016 at 5:09 pm
You made me to think about the reality of this world..wonderful as always! 🙂
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June 16, 2016 at 5:10 pm
so kind of you.. happy with your words..
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June 16, 2016 at 8:53 pm
Pleasure 🙂
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June 16, 2016 at 3:37 pm
Hard-hitting! reality of today’s world! Too good 🙂
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June 16, 2016 at 3:57 pm
thanks a ton dear Hasmeet…happy with your comment
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June 16, 2016 at 3:28 pm
Very well expressed.
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June 16, 2016 at 3:29 pm
thank you…
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June 16, 2016 at 3:32 pm
Pleasure 🙂
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June 16, 2016 at 3:00 pm
Beautiful poem..”Was it my own soul, masked under blindness?” this lines are par excellence ..:)
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June 16, 2016 at 3:08 pm
thanks a ton…hope you are doing good.
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June 16, 2016 at 11:48 pm
I am doing..Hope your doing good too..:)
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June 16, 2016 at 12:17 pm
Beautiful… Both the necklace and the poem… 🙂
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June 16, 2016 at 12:27 pm
thanks a lot ashish..
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June 16, 2016 at 11:58 am
…look thru the veil of blindness, you may just find the soul wearing that diamond necklace!!!
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June 16, 2016 at 12:32 pm
ha ha…if so i dont’ want to see that
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June 16, 2016 at 12:35 pm
just a thought!!
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June 16, 2016 at 11:02 am
Nyc
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June 16, 2016 at 11:55 am
thank you.. have a good day
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June 16, 2016 at 10:33 am
Woah! What an ending. Fantastic
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June 16, 2016 at 10:34 am
Thank you jacque…have a good day..
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June 16, 2016 at 4:34 pm
You too 🙂
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June 16, 2016 at 10:32 am
Wonderful poem! I like the twist at the end, makes one think 😉👍
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June 16, 2016 at 10:33 am
thanks a lot..I am really glad with your kind words.
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June 16, 2016 at 9:26 am
Ohh. Wow!
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June 16, 2016 at 9:28 am
ha.. thank you Saloni…
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June 16, 2016 at 9:28 am
Welcome welcome.
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June 16, 2016 at 9:33 am
🙂
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June 16, 2016 at 9:24 am
Wonderful 🙂
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June 16, 2016 at 9:25 am
thank you so much..:)
have a good day..
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June 16, 2016 at 9:17 am
Do u really need a diamond necklace and a mirror to tell how beautiful your soul is ??
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June 16, 2016 at 9:27 am
well…that’s a good question.. liked it..
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June 16, 2016 at 9:28 am
U got a beautiful soul..when I can realize u can see it too..
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June 16, 2016 at 9:36 am
very very happy….the ever best comment to have in this morning..
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June 16, 2016 at 9:36 am
Honestly akhila..
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June 16, 2016 at 9:39 am
Thanks a lot friend…wish you a great day ahead..
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June 16, 2016 at 9:40 am
Keep writing and I keep reading all of them ..
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June 16, 2016 at 10:08 am
:)…your comments are really inspiring
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June 16, 2016 at 10:11 am
Thank u so much.. Its the least I can do for the best u give
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June 16, 2016 at 9:14 am
hmm! ippol entha paraya! inthinu oru uttaram..
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June 16, 2016 at 9:19 am
thanks dear…:)
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June 16, 2016 at 10:56 am
you know what my problem is, I like happy endings 😀
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June 16, 2016 at 10:56 am
ha ha..
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June 16, 2016 at 11:01 am
Keeping that aside, lot of interconnected memories rushed in with the word Diamond Necklace, the recent one being the Lal Jose Film, a lesson from chemistry in school, Maupassant’s story, in addition to the the various ads for the jewellery .. 🙂
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June 16, 2016 at 11:56 am
ha good..what was that chemistry lesson..?
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June 16, 2016 at 12:03 pm
nothing much, the different forms of Carbon! 😀 Organic Chemistry #101
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October 8, 2017 at 9:25 am
Everyone likes happy endings that’s why people charge more for it . If you know what I mean
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October 8, 2017 at 2:38 pm
Predictable you are mister! 😂
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October 10, 2017 at 4:36 pm
😁
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October 11, 2017 at 5:12 pm
What’s going on here…
Couple of days back, I was wondering where in the world are you…😉
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October 11, 2017 at 9:47 pm
Was in this world itself. 🙂🙂
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