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Serenity

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I am lost in a cloudy dusk

With desperate rainy eyes

I am harsh and heartless

With chaos over my crown

I am striving for that serenity

With freezing blood in my heart

Author: Akhila

Akhila is a self-motivated life-long learner and a self-published author.. She posts technical articles on her blog qualitynotion.com. She runs a personal blog, wordsandnotion.com where she writes about everything from illusion to reality.

62 thoughts on “Serenity”

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  1. thewritewomanblog
    June 27, 2017 at 6:47 pm

    Really? Another poem, Akhi! Adipoli, appol poet okkey varatte.

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  2. akansha1602
    June 25, 2017 at 3:54 pm

    Beautifully written.
    Akhila ma’am you never fail to amaze me with your amazing writeups.

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  3. Aquileana
    June 23, 2017 at 7:24 pm

    Nicely penned… I can relate with the feelings you express here 😉 Sigh …

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  4. crystalamayy
    June 21, 2017 at 10:29 pm

    Emotions r expressed beautifully

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  5. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder
    June 21, 2017 at 6:52 am

    Beautiful….’desperate rainy eyes’ loved that line…

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  6. prashantt
    June 20, 2017 at 11:40 pm

    Hey!! Akhila🙋
    Beautiful & deep, love reading these words from your pen👌📝

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  7. mywords331
    June 20, 2017 at 9:27 pm

    Striving for serenity the heartfelt emotions of yours in the form of poetry.. Lovely..

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  8. Pradita Kapahi
    June 20, 2017 at 8:05 pm

    Pain emanates from this like breath from the lungs. Beautiful

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  9. Moushmi Radhanpara
    June 20, 2017 at 7:06 pm

    Beautifully expressed.
    I guess it is a dark place to be in.

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  10. apassersby
    June 20, 2017 at 5:10 pm

    cool …from a long time friend with new blog 🙂

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  11. Akash Singh
    June 20, 2017 at 2:48 pm

    An excellent poem! It’s impressive that you are able to express deeply in just few lines.

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  13. VPiram
    June 20, 2017 at 12:44 pm

    Nice, vpiram.com

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  14. tingleurtastebuds
    June 20, 2017 at 12:28 pm

    Lovely writing Akhila. I am relating my state of mind to this. At times it becomes the way you have portrayed. 👍🏼👌🏼

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  16. Amal Suresh
    June 20, 2017 at 10:08 am

    Striving for the serenity
    With freezin blood in heart.
    😊😇😘

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  17. Deepika Kumaaraguru
    June 20, 2017 at 9:42 am

    Excellent work, Akhila 🙂 I especially love the line – With desperate rainy eyes. Keep up the good work!

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  18. blindloveweb
    June 20, 2017 at 9:25 am

    BAt present I personally feel this poem fits to my mental condition so much….luv it Akhila😁

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  19. Sidharth
    June 20, 2017 at 9:14 am

    Truly magnificent the way you skillfully used words to portray the intensity of emotions was really impressive, thanks for sharing such a lovely post. According to your convenience please do read some of my writings would love to know what you think about them 😊

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  20. SumitOfficial
    June 20, 2017 at 9:02 am

    Beautiful, Akhila. ❤🙈

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