Emotional Edges

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Frantic buzzing echoing in ears

Tempting to ignore the rhythm of routine

Waves of worries dancing around

Drawing to fall in the pool of uncertainties

The stubborn heart trying hard

To stop the nerves from breaking n bleeding

Lips weaving a forged smile

To bring her back from the emotional edges.

30 responses to “Emotional Edges”

  1. thewritewomanblog Avatar

    Wow, Akhi! I had read this one and even commented on it, but wonder where the comment disappeared. The poet in you is wide awake, appol poetry undalley? Okkey pooratte.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Hehe.
      Comment chilappol network traffic block l kudungikkanum..😂

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      1. thewritewomanblog Avatar

        🙄

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  2. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar

    A perfectly blended poem.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot dear

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  3. Ipuna Black Avatar

    This poem has so much rhythm. It almost feels like it is dancing all alone! Great job!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks ipuna. Have a great time

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  4. Jeni G.J Avatar

    The stubborn heart trying so hard ..wonderful poem Akhila

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks jeni..much love..

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      1. Jeni G.J Avatar

        😊😊

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  5. Mann Avatar
    Mann

    I hope all got success in the end. Is she back???

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Your concern makes me smile.. thanks mann

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      1. Mann Avatar
        Mann

        😊😊😊

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  6. Meenakshi Sethi Avatar

    That’s superb Akhila! You should right more poems!!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot meenakshi…😍

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      1. Meenakshi Sethi Avatar

        Will wait for your next one 💖

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  7. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    Beautiful words Akhila.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks kamal..😊

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      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        Welcome Dear

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  8. Inked philosophy Avatar

    We want ur review ..Please visit to our blog ..N help us to grow

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Will check soon

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  9. Inked philosophy Avatar

    Beautifully written 👌 I

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you..

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  10. arcane97 Avatar

    Awsm

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks

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  11. Heart to soul. Avatar

    It’s beautiful.! Lovely!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you bhavika

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      1. Heart to soul. Avatar

        http://wp.me/s7BbJN-darkness I. Hope you like it.

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  12. akansha1602 Avatar

    This one is beautiful!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you akansha

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