I promised her soul

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  1. thewritewomanblog Avatar

    Oh! That feeling grips your heart causing a strange and unpleasant ache, one that you simply cannot define. Poor guy, hopes they are together soon.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Yeah.. there is something which cannot be defined, as you said an unpleasant ache.. but nothing as in your last sentence😉

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      1. thewritewomanblog Avatar

        😉

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  2. bhaatdal Avatar

    Woww .. thats deep

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Mm… much unsaid

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      1. bhaatdal Avatar

        😍😘

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  3. Madhusudan Avatar

    Wow………..beautiful post

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you

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  4. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar

    Some deep feeelings portrayed here. 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Ya,you are right..it’s something very deep and so I just put some paint and powder to hide the intense emotions behind the same…

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      1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar

        I understand, but sometimes these emotions are best not hidden, but most of the times these days we are forced to hide these emotions.

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          Thanks dear for reading between lines..

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          1. Moushmi Radhanpara Avatar

            Always welcome. 🙂

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  5. 2ndhalfolife Avatar

    Feels like a dream…

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  6. Infinite Living Avatar

    Wow! Took me a while to sink in …

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks dear…

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  7. sudershana Avatar

    Beautifully capture every emotion

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks purva

      Like

  8. prashantt Avatar
    prashantt

    Deep intense thought👌📝

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Hmm.. Thank you

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  9. ♡AM's Life♡ Avatar

    Astonishing. ♡

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you..

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  10. my valiant soul Avatar
    my valiant soul

    Stunning work.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks dear..

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  11. crazygenesblog Avatar

    That was very beautiful Akhila , you told a story in a few words . To everyone it means something different . I am in awe of you !

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Ya..it could be interpreted in any ways though it’s not a fiction..thanks a lot

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      1. crazygenesblog Avatar

        😀

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  12. Shreya Sharma Avatar

    Hallucinations 😞
    But it’s beautiful, love ❤️

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Maybe hallucinations..but I have a promise to keep…

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      1. Shreya Sharma Avatar

        Promise?

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          Hmm.. shhhh

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          1. Shreya Sharma Avatar

            😐😐

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      2. Shreya Sharma Avatar

        Hmm!! Keep it❤️😐

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  13. PriyaPandian Avatar

    Beautiful post Akhila ☺️👍👍

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot priya..how are you doing

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      1. PriyaPandian Avatar

        You are welcome dear ☺️ I’m fine Akhila and hope you are the same☺️👍

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  14. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    So eerie to see a reflection on the wall and you finally killed her. So now at peace. Superb words Akhila.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Should be resting in peace.😊

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      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        Yes definitely.

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  15. Shoba Menon Avatar

    This is too good !

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks shobha..

      Like

  16. icerene01 Avatar

    you’re great!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      😇 thanks

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  17. kalyansparks Avatar

    Who is she???? Why you experience these kind of things frequently..I think someday even you will talk to me using me telepathy…

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Nice of you to ask who is she..this she is not the other she ..😅..this is not about my inner self… it’s a real soul resting in peace..someone

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      1. Akhila Avatar

        Someone whom I love a lot

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        1. Jeni G.J Avatar

          I’m really sorry for what I commented lately. I didn’t know it was real. Take care akhila. Much love

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          1. Akhila Avatar

            Oh dear jeni.. I know you were just kidding and that’s why i replied in the same lines too..so don’t worry at all..

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      2. kalyansparks Avatar

        I don’t think souls revolve around us.Though they revolve they don’t have Human emotions,because they are liberated from body.soo that particular”she” maybe mother ,Friend,sister or even a baby.Soul resting in peace is western notion.According to Indian theory,it already have wore a new body.

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          Aha.. What all things are there in your master brain…even you differentiated the souls between west and east

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          1. kalyansparks Avatar

            But I didn’t differentiated south indian souls and north indian souls of if that’s the case according to you..South Indian souls dailyr revolve around dosas..and north indian souls of revolve around aloo paratha.😝😝..I am not differentiating souls..I am differentiating the theory that define souls

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  18. Gastradamus Avatar

    Continue to enlighten your soul and good things shall come.

    Gastradamus is booming, please come on by and share your thoughts sista

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks .will check

      Like

  19. supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Avatar
    supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

    You saw a ghost?? 👻
    I mean, ghosts are the ones who have a cold body right. Be careful aks, if you start feeling cold all of a sudden on a sunny day, it means there is a ghost standing next to you.
    I think the one in your story came from that photo hung on the wall.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks Re.. truly wishing if your words came true…I am here to welcome that ghost wholeheartedly 😍

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  20. Aanchal Avatar

    Beautiful this is.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Is it.. thank you anchal

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  21. Malini Avatar

    Intense words in two lines. Beautiful 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks Malini.. ya, there is some intense emotions behind the words..

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  22. Jeni G.J Avatar

    You killed her 😶 very cruel😈

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Ha ha..🤣 you gave me the weapon😜

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      1. Jeni G.J Avatar

        You win😊😊

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          It’s a Win-win..
          between did you post that one killing both

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          1. Jeni G.J Avatar

            Not yet.you made me think about a happy ending.

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              Happy or sad endings.. both will fit in to your words perfectly

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              1. Jeni G.J Avatar

                That’s 2 litres of boost to me😊😊

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  Between may I ask, how you people come up with such fictions…some wild imaginations or something somewhere happened..

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                  1. Jeni G.J Avatar

                    You got it right.wild imaginations most of the times and sometimes it’s happened somewhere. Btw you can ask others too

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                    1. Akhila Avatar

                      👏

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  23. valerie-the-escapist Avatar

    Beautifully expressed ☺👍

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you. Have a good day

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      1. valerie-the-escapist Avatar

        🙂

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  24. Sangbad Avatar

    This is very much intense as well as intriguing…

    By the way, here’s the promised second part posted last eve…

    M: A Shade of Satisfaction

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you so much…will check it soon

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  25. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    Wow. This is great! You should think about writing tiny tales too 😉🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Ha ha.. writing tales… why should be a competitor for you😜

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      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

        😂 aeyyy, competition onnum alla. 😉 It’ll be fun. Oru change aavumallo! 😀

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          🤣🤣 just kidding.. trying to hide my poor skills in producing fictional characters..between did you think that it was a fiction I posted today?

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          1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

            Enikk vayichitt fiction pole thoni! You know, I never thought I would write fiction. Enitt ippo ezhuthunnath mostly fiction aanu 😉😀

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              Oh.. but what I wrote was not a fiction..and whatever I wrote so far were neither fictitious..
              I really love you people writing tiny tales in a few words and convey the essence..it’s really an art..

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              1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

                Sheriya your posts ellaam observations pole aanu. But entho ith vayichappol fiction pole thoni 😅
                Maybe it’s because my mind has an inclination towards fiction 😉
                Thank you, dear. It means a lot to hear that. But I’m no expert. You should check out the​ official ttt (terribly tiny tales) page. They publish great tiny tales everyday!

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  Thanks for ttt….

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                  1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

                    It’s a great page! They are the ones who got me into writing tiny tales in the first place! 😁

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                    1. Akhila Avatar

                      Just googling or is there any link?

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                    2. Shweta Suresh Avatar

                      I’ve got you covered. Here’s the link – https://www.facebook.com/terriblytinytales/

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                    3. Akhila Avatar

                      👍😊

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  26. Reflection of Observer Avatar

    Ente sare…….♥♥♥chechi great feeling wheni read sentences

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Hello.. pravasi ayo…

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      1. Reflection of Observer Avatar

        Full ayilla…50% eppolum Nattila…! Kuwait aanu etu.so kuzappamilla..

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          👍 this is a new phase..when it is accepted, we have to live with that..

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          1. Reflection of Observer Avatar

            Yaa I can

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  27. mihrank Avatar

    wow – this is deep words with excellent feelings…

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot.. Have a great time

      Like

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