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I promised her soul

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She came to me; her cold hands touched my shoulders. It was a reminder of my words.

When I woke up there was no one else other than her image hanging on my walls of mind.

Author: Akhila

Akhila is the founder and sole contributor of wordsandnotion.com and qualitynotion.com. A self motivated life long learner who loves to decode signs from the universe. Her weirdness is totally aligned with her real life stories and thought experiments. She is the author of β€œKnow them, One answer to many questions” (a General Knowledge book) and β€œI Had a Crush - The 17 Kinks” (A free ebook of 17 short stories)

93 thoughts on “I promised her soul

  1. Oh! That feeling grips your heart causing a strange and unpleasant ache, one that you simply cannot define. Poor guy, hopes they are together soon.

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  2. Wow………..beautiful post

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  3. Some deep feeelings portrayed here. πŸ™‚

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  4. Wow! Took me a while to sink in …

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  5. Beautifully capture every emotion

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  6. Deep intense thoughtπŸ‘ŒπŸ“

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  7. Stunning work.

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  8. That was very beautiful Akhila , you told a story in a few words . To everyone it means something different . I am in awe of you !

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  9. Hallucinations 😞
    But it’s beautiful, love ❀️

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  10. Beautiful post Akhila β˜ΊοΈπŸ‘πŸ‘

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  11. So eerie to see a reflection on the wall and you finally killed her. So now at peace. Superb words Akhila.

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  12. Who is she???? Why you experience these kind of things frequently..I think someday even you will talk to me using me telepathy…

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  13. Continue to enlighten your soul and good things shall come.

    Gastradamus is booming, please come on by and share your thoughts sista

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  14. You saw a ghost?? πŸ‘»
    I mean, ghosts are the ones who have a cold body right. Be careful aks, if you start feeling cold all of a sudden on a sunny day, it means there is a ghost standing next to you.
    I think the one in your story came from that photo hung on the wall.

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  15. Intense words in two lines. Beautiful πŸ™‚

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  16. You killed her 😢 very cruel😈

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  17. Beautifully expressed β˜ΊπŸ‘

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  18. This is very much intense as well as intriguing…

    By the way, here’s the promised second part posted last eve…

    https://thoughtsofwordsblog.wordpress.com/2017/03/22/14085/

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  19. Wow. This is great! You should think about writing tiny tales too πŸ˜‰πŸ™‚

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  20. Ente sare…….β™₯β™₯β™₯chechi great feeling wheni read sentences

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  21. wow – this is deep words with excellent feelings…

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