Flying cage of honey

Published by

on

My curtains blowing on a windy day

Rising up like a flying cage of honey

Sniffing and snuffling in between

Climbing on the walls to feel the crown

With my eyes closed, ears wide open,

I just sauntered into that flying cage

Now I can see and hear you whistling

You are humming for me and me alone,

While your hands are holding me sweetly

And making me feel your warm touch.

68 responses to “Flying cage of honey”

  1. kalyansparks Avatar

    Hope you enjoy your humming 😜 ..nice lines

    Like

  2. thewritewomanblog Avatar

    ‘The She’ is feeling loved! Let her enjoy her honey-sweet time!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      😍😍 thanks my friend

      Liked by 1 person

      1. thewritewomanblog Avatar

        😍😍

        Liked by 1 person

  3. Meenakshi Sethi Avatar

    Honey wind!! Such a beautiful way to describe its feel! Loved it 😍

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks meenakshi.. the wind was so sweet that nothing else could be a better word for that feel…

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Meenakshi Sethi Avatar

        I loved this 😍

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Akhila Avatar

          😍😍

          Liked by 1 person

  4. Alfaazon ki udaan Avatar

    lovely lines akhila

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot

      Liked by 1 person

  5. Fairy Kumar Avatar

    So gentle!!!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks my little fairy.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Fairy Kumar Avatar

        Pleasure is all mine!!

        Liked by 1 person

  6. gunnardeckare Avatar

    Wonderful poetry!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you so much

      Liked by 1 person

  7. Beparvah !! Avatar
    Beparvah !!

    Awesome !! Loved it !!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks chandrajit

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Beparvah !! Avatar
        Beparvah !!

        My pressure completely 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

  8. bisimodupe1975 Avatar
    bisimodupe1975

    Beautifully written…. Love how you crafty took us through thus quiet moment between two lovers

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot.. Just an attempt to give a romantic touch to my dancing curtains in the wind😇

      Like

  9. Letters That Matter Avatar

    Loved reading this one!!!

    Like

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot. Glad that you enjoyed it

      Liked by 1 person

  10. my valiant soul Avatar
    my valiant soul

    I adore such poems that have deep words,emotions.Great one!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks devika. 😘😘

      Liked by 1 person

  11. vishal4u Avatar

    I am still wondering how sweet that flying cage of honey might be???
    Lovely poem!!! 👌👌

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks vishal.. Yes it was very lovely to watch my curtains blowing in that wind

      Liked by 1 person

      1. vishal4u Avatar

        Yup curtain dancing on a rhythm of winds has surely mesmerized you and this lovely poem of yours.

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Akhila Avatar

          😊

          Liked by 1 person

  12. pins & ashes Avatar

    That wind was awesome. But I loved the curtain more 😍😘

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Now i have a wind chime also there in between the curtains

      Liked by 1 person

      1. pins & ashes Avatar

        Photo! It will go Ching Chang and make beautiful sounds … Mmmm

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Akhila Avatar

          send cheyyam..

          Like

          1. pins & ashes Avatar

            😍😘

            Liked by 1 person

  13. kawsreflections Avatar

    Loved this!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks

      Liked by 1 person

      1. kawsreflections Avatar

        You’re welcome.

        Like

  14. extinct0703 Avatar

    Wonderful poem Akhila!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      😊 not as wonderful as that strong wind

      Liked by 1 person

      1. extinct0703 Avatar

        Aah that only you can tell

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Akhila Avatar

          😉

          Like

  15. Sangbad Avatar

    I want to flatter while commenting but I can’t because the poem is so good and full of love…imitative words can spoil the comment…

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot for your kind words.. But frankly, i am not satisfied with that poem..as if i didn’t pay full credits to the wind i experienced yesterday in my home

      Like

      1. Sangbad Avatar

        Is it call coincidence…s’how I also felt that after reading the last line…I thought you had written like that to give the poem a beautiful romantic charm as well as turn…

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Akhila Avatar

          Ya..i was trying to give a romantic feel to my blowing curtains ..😇

          Liked by 1 person

          1. Sangbad Avatar

            Good, then your try is a successful one…

            Liked by 1 person

            1. Akhila Avatar

              😊

              Liked by 1 person

  16. Reflection of Observer Avatar

    നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട്

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      😊😊

      Liked by 1 person

  17. SumitOfficial Avatar

    Reading such a beautiful poem after a long time from you, Akhila. 😋😎😍😘

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      are baba.. so you were not reading me so long.. phewwww….

      Liked by 1 person

      1. SumitOfficial Avatar

        Arre I said na so much busy in wedding 😋😂

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Akhila Avatar

          Mm.. The busy celebrity😂😜

          Liked by 1 person

          1. SumitOfficial Avatar

            Kya yaar aap bhi.. Hahahaha

            Liked by 1 person

  18. Bikramjit Avatar
    Bikramjit

    A lovely poem…

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks bikram..

      Like

  19. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    Oh so sweet and beautiful Akhila, flying higher and higher and so nice all honey dripping out of the cage. Great.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot for your kind words. I also enjoyed my curtains blowing in that honey wind

      Liked by 1 person

      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        Ya great and such a wonderful feeling to just let yourself go and be free.

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Akhila Avatar

          I will share you that feeling soon

          Liked by 1 person

          1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

            Great now write a nice poem on the swaying wind.

            Liked by 1 person

            1. Akhila Avatar

              Yes, this is the same poem out of that tornado

              Liked by 1 person

              1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

                Great

                Like

  20. RAFI Avatar

    nice

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank rafi

      Liked by 1 person

  21. Shreya Sharma Avatar

    Akhila😍😍
    This is sooo sweet! Honey-like.
    Loved it. 😄😘

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Yes..it was very very sweet to taste that strong wind

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Shreya Sharma Avatar

        😘😄❤️

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Akhila Avatar

          😃😃

          Like

Leave a comment

Create a website or blog at WordPress.com

Discover more from words and notion

Subscribe now to keep reading and get access to the full archive.

Continue reading