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Flying cage of honey


My curtains blowing on a windy day

Rising up like a flying cage of honey

Sniffing and snuffling in between

Climbing on the walls to feel the crown

With my eyes closed, ears wide open,

I just sauntered into that flying cage

Now I can see and hear you whistling

You are humming for me and me alone,

While your hands are holding me sweetly

And making me feel your warm touch.

Author: Akhila

Akhila is the founder and sole contributor of wordsandnotion.com and qualitynotion.com. A self motivated life long learner who loves to decode signs from the universe. Her weirdness is totally aligned with her real life stories and thought experiments. She is the author of “Know them, One answer to many questions” (a General Knowledge book) and “I Had a Crush - The 17 Kinks” (A free ebook of 17 short stories)

68 thoughts on “Flying cage of honey

  1. Hope you enjoy your humming 😜 ..nice lines


  2. ‘The She’ is feeling loved! Let her enjoy her honey-sweet time!

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  3. Honey wind!! Such a beautiful way to describe its feel! Loved it 😍

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  4. Awesome !! Loved it !!

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  5. Beautifully written…. Love how you crafty took us through thus quiet moment between two lovers

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  6. I adore such poems that have deep words,emotions.Great one!

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  7. I am still wondering how sweet that flying cage of honey might be???
    Lovely poem!!! 👌👌

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  8. That wind was awesome. But I loved the curtain more 😍😘

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  9. I want to flatter while commenting but I can’t because the poem is so good and full of love…imitative words can spoil the comment…

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  10. നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട്

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  11. Reading such a beautiful poem after a long time from you, Akhila. 😋😎😍😘

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  12. Oh so sweet and beautiful Akhila, flying higher and higher and so nice all honey dripping out of the cage. Great.

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  13. Akhila😍😍
    This is sooo sweet! Honey-like.
    Loved it. 😄😘

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