I esteem the energy while I am with you

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It’s not the passion in his eyes that she loves

It’s not the boldness in his bones that she likes

It’s not the brainy words that catch her at once

It’s not the charisma in his voice that allures her

But it’s his confident vibes that cheer her up

His liveliness passes in her nerves, fuels her n

Inspires her existence every now and then.

She esteems the energy while being with him.

97 responses to “I esteem the energy while I am with you”

  1. rjfaithnlove Avatar

    Nice…. 🙂

    My new post fr u

    Check Your Thoughts !!!

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  2. Meenakshi Sethi Avatar

    Someone is in love 💖 Beautifully expressed Akhila! 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      love, love and only love..😍😍😍

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      1. Meenakshi Sethi Avatar

        May it keep growing 😍😍😍

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          ya…thank you so much

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  3. extinct0703 Avatar

    Wonderful and pleasant surprise. Great work

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Dhiraj…

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      1. extinct0703 Avatar

        You should pen down poems more often please.

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          to improve myself..lol

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          1. extinct0703 Avatar

            No not at all, that’s very pleasing so asked to write more often

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              😜😜I was just kidding

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  4. Pauletry Avatar

    Wow…am loving this… always a fan

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks a lot. have a good day

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      1. Pauletry Avatar

        Definitely will

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  5. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

    hmmmm,,,cheers to his ‘confident vibes’..nice one

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thank you…:)

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  6. Akhila Avatar

    yessss…. thank you

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  7. Rasakama Avatar

    Beautiful, powerful and heartfelt. Wow ! I really enjoyed reading. How would I explain… It’s like fuel to my brain. Thanks Akhila !

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      happy with your words…hope your brain is still okay with my fuel..;)

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  8. mywords331 Avatar

    Love is lovely and you make it more meaningful in your words..!

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  9. Infinite Living Avatar

    Absolutely loved the energy behind this poem! 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Pragalbha.. Good morning

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  10. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder Avatar

    Pithy but precise… 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks dear..

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  11. spudbudette Avatar
    spudbudette

    This certainly pulls ones attention in!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      glad that your attention came in..have a great time

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  12. savetheworld1001 Avatar

    Hi, great poetry, I suggest you read Tao Te Ching, there you have both wisdom and poetry. Anyways, if you really want a very good article, check this out: https://savetheworld1001.wordpress.com/2016/11/24/the-galaxy-is-so-big-and-carelessness-will-cost-us-the-universe/

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks for the suggestion

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  13. sparklingpoems Avatar
    sparklingpoems

    This was simple and too beautiful!!!….

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thank you so much.. have an energetic time

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      1. sparklingpoems Avatar
        sparklingpoems

        Thanks for your good wishes…

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  14. doodlessworld Avatar
    doodlessworld

    That Is really very beautiful
    and after reading it the only question ihave is
    written for whom? :p

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thank you so much… answer is open ended…shhhhhhhh

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      1. doodlessworld Avatar
        doodlessworld

        Hahaha. Clever one 😉

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          😉

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    2. Akhila Avatar

      in between can you please check your spam..? i remember commenting on your “no negative vibes”

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      1. doodlessworld Avatar
        doodlessworld

        Okayy

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      2. doodlessworld Avatar
        doodlessworld

        Thankyou for mentioning about it

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  15. my valiant soul Avatar
    my valiant soul

    Good to see,romance flowing from your pen.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks dear…yes, sometimes my crazy pen appears to be romantic..

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  16. novelistbaba Avatar
    novelistbaba

    WoW!!! beautiful…………simple, honest and heartfelt……..loved this!!! 🙂 🙂

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  17. kiranmag Avatar

    Loved it especially the last 4 lines creating a deep impact

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Kiran.. yes, those four lines are heart of the poem

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      1. kiranmag Avatar

        😊 Good night Akhila busy in exam preparation university exams going on…. DSA day after tomorrow

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          best wishes dear…

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          1. kiranmag Avatar

            Thank you 😊

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  18. Shreya Sharma Avatar

    Great. 😻
    Basically he is a booster. 😋😇

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      ha ha…but for she alone…;)

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  19. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    Beautiful and so powerful words. Superb poem written so poignantly.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks kamal..

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      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        Welcome dear.

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          will check fb by tomorrow and get back..

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          1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

            K Akhila good night have a great sleep.

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  20. Masoom Jethwa Avatar

    Strong the words, Impact more stronger !

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  21. batrah Avatar

    U have written this from the bottom of ur heart

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thank you .. have a good day

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      1. batrah Avatar

        Wish you the same

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  22. pins & ashes Avatar

    Whose the him?

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      ha ha.. no place for a doubt..

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      1. pins & ashes Avatar

        Really 😂

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          😂

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      2. pins & ashes Avatar

        Since I come from the tradition of doubting Thomas, I’m always in doubt ya! Ancestry problem .. 😎😎

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          athu nalla thallu kittanjitta..😎

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          1. A Avatar
            A

            I second that 😂

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              Ehh.. you read that…?

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              1. A Avatar
                A

                Yes

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          2. pins & ashes Avatar

            Thallan ammuse vanaalle.. I’m the good daughter no … 😇😇

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              “the good daughter “….. arum kelkkenda..

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              1. pins & ashes Avatar

                Athe! Samshayam vallathum ubdenkil call ammuse! 😇😇😇

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  oh.. athippo chodikkanenthirikkunnu.. enikkariyallo ninte multi roles..😎

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                  1. pins & ashes Avatar

                    Oh ho..! Real life friend thane! Avanu onnum manasilavilla 😂😂😂😂

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        2. A Avatar
          A

          Ancestry problem I don’t think so.. individual problem might be

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          1. pins & ashes Avatar

            Ayyada! Saadhaname!

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            1. A Avatar
              A

              😂

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              1. pins & ashes Avatar

                Ya ya ask akhi what is saadhaname … 😂😎

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  😎😎

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                  1. pins & ashes Avatar

                    He gets one and he doesn’t get the other .. Doubting Thomas again 😎😂

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                    1. Akhila Avatar

                      what what.. i didnt get..

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                    2. pins & ashes Avatar

                      Oh you didn’t get too ..ask adorable a 😂😂

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                    3. Akhila Avatar

                      nee innu nalla form l anallo…ellarem kuzhappikkaniringiyirikkayanoda…

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                    4. pins & ashes Avatar

                      Kure nallukalku shesham thalla kaanivhathalle! Oru bang okke vende alle 😂😂😂

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                    5. Akhila Avatar

                      big bang akumo..?

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                    6. A Avatar
                      A

                      Hopefully.. started banging my head against the wall already 😂

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                    7. Akhila Avatar

                      So ash. malayalam thanne mathi…let us see if his walls are cracked..

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                    8. A Avatar
                      A

                      Strong walls I guess been banging for months now ever since I met her on WP.. still holding on

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                    9. pins & ashes Avatar

                      Paaavam wp!

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                    10. pins & ashes Avatar

                      Absolutely. I don’t known the malayalam for that 😂😂

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                    11. pins & ashes Avatar

                      Aaakam! Venamenkil … Venno

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  23. theonlysup Avatar

    its good the a person spreads positive vibes and women loves it. but the reason why such positivity is around him are the ones you mentioned above(passion,boldness,intellect.charisma or the x factor)

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      may be you are right..that’s the beauty of love

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      1. theonlysup Avatar

        haha.. just a thought came across my mind 🙂

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  24. A Avatar
    A

    Renewable or non renewable ??

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      as long as the trust is there, it is renewable..

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      1. A Avatar
        A

        😇

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  26. Josh Avatar

    Rom Akki Back! Bravo 🙂 Happy Morning!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Good Afternoon Jo…

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