Scream of an unborn

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I always imagined your shining eyes welcoming me to my new home. I thought there was deep love in your heart. I was eagerly waiting for that day to happen.

But all of a sudden, it occurred..

I saw something coming towards me. I haven’t seen such a thing ever in my life. I smiled at it. But it didn’t smile back. Instead it hugged me, hugged me so tightly that I couldn’t breathe at all. I couldn’t understand what was happening to me. The sharp objects crushed me completely.

Still I donno why did you deny my arrival in to your world? And finally why did you cut me into pieces? Can you ever guess the pain I felt? Physically as well as mentally you hurt me so badly.

Your right to make decisions deprived me of my right to life. You misunderstood that I feel nothing and understand nothing. You never heard me screaming while you killed me brutally. The pain will be back to haunt you if you ever know my scream.

94 responses to “Scream of an unborn”

  1. thewritewomanblog Avatar

    This piece tore at my heart, Akhila! You have brought out a topic that is more suppressed than spoken about.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Pranitha..ya might be a suppressed topic as it is sensitive and hurting some hearts.

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      1. thewritewomanblog Avatar

        Yes!

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  2. Josh Avatar

    Terrific rendering!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      hmmm….

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      1. Josh Avatar

        Oh no.. Sorry!

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          EHH.. WHY.?

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          1. Josh Avatar

            May be this piece of writing inspired from people you might know ( If not well and good ) having said that.. Scream of an unborn.. keep this on record, something similar might release in youtube soon with a different perspective. I will update!

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              inspired from a recent news read..court allowed a girl to abort her baby after a rape..might be for her good.. but the unborn scream behind that news haunted me a lot..
              waiting for your video..

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              1. Josh Avatar

                Oh! Sure.

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  3. Meenakshi Sethi Avatar

    I’m having goose bumps while reading it…A very powerful message that no one has right to violate the right of a new life to enter this world!!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks meenakshi…hope the message is spread in the right way..

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      1. Meenakshi Sethi Avatar

        Absolutely correct message and I agree with you! Decision of bringing or not bringing a child should be taken before conceiving.

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  4. undiscoveredgirl13 Avatar

    Tbh its hard reading something like that when you have miscarried because its makes us think back to what we have been trying to heal from but know that we probably never will .

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  5. undiscoveredgirl13 Avatar

    Can you guys check out my blog pleaseee :p thanksss

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      will check..

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  6. Becky Bee Avatar

    I’m sorry. I can’t agree with this post… Your choices and feelings regarding abortion are your own, but imagine reading something like this if you have ever had an abortion or miscarried… it doesn’t bear thinking about.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      yes.. it’s my opinion. i cant bear people suffering even if it is an unborn..
      but of course i can understand the perspective you are referring to.

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      1. Becky Bee Avatar

        I understand it’s your opinion 🙂 & no harm meant by sharing mine.

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          infact i am thankful to you …

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  7. Vikas Singh Avatar
    Vikas Singh

    I wish people may understand the pain.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      yesss… let them hear that silent scream

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  8. sinisterdarksoul Avatar

    That packed one hell of a wallop! Also amazingly honest! I was almost left speechless. 😮

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      let us spread the awareness..and wish for less silent screams in future..

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  9. Ashik T M Avatar

    Let your words open up our minds☺…topic which everyone needs to have a deeper dig,those are real nightmares😑

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Ashik…i know i must have hurt some girls emotions.. but i couldnt resist posting this..

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  10. Mann Avatar
    Mann

    I am shocked at the cruelty of people…it’s a sin. 😨😱

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      yes mann… it’s a sin whatever maybe the causes

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  11. my valiant soul Avatar
    my valiant soul

    A sensitive topic beautifully written.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks mvs.. hmm.. sensitive.. i know i might have hurt someone

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  12. Bikramjit Avatar
    Bikramjit

    I am with you 100% but won’t it be worse for the child to be born and not cared for.. what about those screams that come ..

    It is a very difficult to see what is right or wrong. But nevertheless it is sad very sad…

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      yes, bikram..good or bad, right or wrong, boon or bane.. everything based on perspectives…. still how can we have shut our ears towards the scream of an unborn

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  13. unsaid words Avatar

    This is painful ,well if doesn’t want the baby .They should look for the means which can prevent this.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      yes.. but when lust overrules the humanity, the evilness come into picture..

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      1. unsaid words Avatar

        Yes !that’s brutual indeed

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  14. Shaggy Avatar

    Btw the thing you wrote is so accurate that it hurts….. Damn The society….

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      hmm..atleast 50 % f such murders could have been prevented if the people can hear those silent screams..

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      1. Shaggy Avatar

        If only….
        I always wondered what goes through the mother while killing her baby

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  15. Shaggy Avatar

    71 likes in 23 minutes….. Woah!!! Blogging goals….

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      ha ha..nope yar.. it was a repost.. so might be 23 + hours..

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      1. Shaggy Avatar

        Besides you are blogging since 1885 so…. We can actually expect these kind of achievements

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          lol

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          1. Shaggy Avatar

            Yea I am very funny… Am I not?

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  16. atrangizindagieksafar Avatar

    Very powerful… abortion is a nightmare…

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      yes it is..but unfortunately it cannt be banned or wont be banned completely.

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      1. atrangizindagieksafar Avatar

        in cases of rape its a boon…. but otherwise….

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          hmm… can argue it as a boon or bane even in case of a rape..why the innocent child should suffer..

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          1. atrangizindagieksafar Avatar

            that’s entirely a person’s own prerogative dear… cant argue there. it was just a thought. whether they want to live with the living memory of a heinous crime or terminate it… its a persons own choice… cant dictate terms here. one has to raped first to be a judge on that

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              true.. it depends..

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              1. atrangizindagieksafar Avatar

                Yes but I’m against girls getting carelessly into a physical relationship and then going in for an abortion…. if you have to get physical… fine. But be careful.

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  hmm…it is a world where there is no boundaries for lust…it’s shameful

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  17. novelistbaba Avatar
    novelistbaba

    powerful…………i agree with you………..this is cruel and inhumane……….people need to be careful……its not their choice alone. 🙂 🙂
    and going by the time of me reading this……i am definitely going to have nightmares……

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      nightmares.for you..hmm…

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      1. novelistbaba Avatar
        novelistbaba

        Still couldn’t think beyond myself……….i need some help………a lot of us do….

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          ya.. people do this, support the abortion .. reasons could be many, and justifiable in their words…but why the unborn suffer..?

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          1. novelistbaba Avatar
            novelistbaba

            True…….and i will be honest…….i am not going to bear a child in this life……so i will never have a personal insight in this matter…….and i do not have a clear resolve in this……..i do think that there should be some freedom for a woman to be able to chose……..but gender discrimination is wrong and nothing can justify that……again i do not know what i am talking about……..

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  18. tingleurtastebuds Avatar

    Yeah true the pain is so true and untold. People just do it just for their selfish reasons. Too brutal. Wish all hospitals just say no to this. Many don’t get a baby and there are ppl who are just doing this. Sad though.
    Meena

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      yes, meena its pathetic whatever may be the underlying reasons..

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  19. skc12 Avatar

    Nice..

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  20. Puneet Avatar

    Deep with profound pain.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      ya…it’s a painful thing happening millions of times in the world in a year.

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  21. Masoom Jethwa Avatar

    Painfully deep expressed. Great potential of short writing.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks masoom..yes, it is painful

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  22. Vivek Vatsal1 Avatar

    Reblogged this on Incredible Pie and commented:
    Even an unborn deserves Love, why just keep it limited……Make Love, Give love but inhumane acts may not always justify your actions… It’s better to PROTECT yourself, if you aren’t ready for the responsibilities…. Very Bold Post👍 Must Read…and Share as well

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks a lot for the reblog vivek.

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  23. Vivek Vatsal1 Avatar

    The bitter fact is that people want to make love, but hate responsibilities…. and in a way they even turn inhumane at times. These atrocities have been inflicting the society since long. Bold writing👍

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks vivek..ya.. when love/lust and responsibilities are not in sync, the things appear inhumane..

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  24. prashantt Avatar
    prashantt

    Omg!! Fabulous on writing Ms Akhila…👏👏👏
    This is more like of i dreamt in nights also😛

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Prashant..
      let the eyes be opened towards this bitter fact..

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  25. Fab Writings Avatar

    Omg, you wrote such a powerful piece against foetus foeticide…
    *Applause* 😊

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Harsh…normally while saying thanks, we should be happy.. but this time, I am not at all happy as these kinds of brutal murders haunt me so badly

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      1. Fab Writings Avatar

        Yes Di, whenever I hear such cases, i think like “who gave them the right to snatch someone’s right to life”

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          true that..even if the fetus can feel the pain or not, no one has that right to snatch their lives..

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  26. Manu Michael sdb Avatar

    I always wonder how can a loving mother could allow her body to be place of such brutality…

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      hmm.. still it happens in this world knowingly or unknowingly..

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  27. nkdwhtguy Avatar

    Powerful writing!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks. have a great day

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  28. Varsh Avatar

    Oh God! You made so ghastly!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      recently read a news , the court allowing an unmarried mother to abort her unborn , considering her mental conditions. I think it happened when the fetus was 20 weeks or more. As per science the baby can really really feel the pain if it is 20 weeks old..so sad, no..

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      1. Varsh Avatar

        It is a sad thing to do, but in cases like this one don’t you think it is better than bringing a life in this big bad world and having no one to tend to it?

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          frankly speaking i donno…but why the innocent child.. that’s what painful..

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  29. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

    hmmmm….

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      hmmm…many silent murders in the world, no..

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      1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

        so true…but

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          i know why this but now..

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          1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

            hmmm… you tell, why the ‘why’ ??

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              ‘but’ could be to save her who is mentally /physically unprepared..

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              1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

                hey..akhila!! cheers(exactly the same thought).. gb

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  gb..?

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                  1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

                    God Bless…

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  30. vishal4u Avatar

    OMG that is just so brutal, could hardly complete reading it.
    What a disgraceful act by humans.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      ya..it is damn brutal…..millions and millions of abortions are happening in a year in the world.. who cares about the scream of those unborns…

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  31. radhikasreflection Avatar

    A poignant piece Akhila!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks Radhi…But a bitter fact in the world..

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