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Scream of an unborn

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I always imagined your shining eyes welcoming me to my new home. I thought there was deep love in your heart. I was eagerly waiting for that day to happen.

But all of a sudden, it occurred..

I saw something coming towards me. I haven’t seen such a thing ever in my life. I smiled at it. But it didn’t smile back. Instead it hugged me, hugged me so tightly that I couldn’t breathe at all. I couldn’t understand what was happening to me. The sharp objects crushed me completely.

Still I donno why did you deny my arrival in to your world? And finally why did you cut me into pieces? Can you ever guess the pain I felt? Physically as well as mentally you hurt me so badly.

Your right to make decisions deprived me of my right to life. You misunderstood that I feel nothing and understand nothing. You never heard me screaming while you killed me brutally. The pain will be back to haunt you if you ever know my scream.

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Author: Akhila

I am flying across the space between words and whipping up whimsical waves of notion to discern the quantum code of my soul.

94 thoughts on “Scream of an unborn

  1. This piece tore at my heart, Akhila! You have brought out a topic that is more suppressed than spoken about.

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  2. I’m having goose bumps while reading it…A very powerful message that no one has right to violate the right of a new life to enter this world!!

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  3. Tbh its hard reading something like that when you have miscarried because its makes us think back to what we have been trying to heal from but know that we probably never will .

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  5. I’m sorry. I can’t agree with this post… Your choices and feelings regarding abortion are your own, but imagine reading something like this if you have ever had an abortion or miscarried… it doesn’t bear thinking about.

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  6. I wish people may understand the pain.

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  7. That packed one hell of a wallop! Also amazingly honest! I was almost left speechless. 😮

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  8. Let your words open up our minds☺…topic which everyone needs to have a deeper dig,those are real nightmares😑

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  9. I am shocked at the cruelty of people…it’s a sin. 😨😱

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  10. A sensitive topic beautifully written.

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  11. I am with you 100% but won’t it be worse for the child to be born and not cared for.. what about those screams that come ..

    It is a very difficult to see what is right or wrong. But nevertheless it is sad very sad…

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  12. This is painful ,well if doesn’t want the baby .They should look for the means which can prevent this.

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  13. Btw the thing you wrote is so accurate that it hurts….. Damn The society….

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  14. 71 likes in 23 minutes….. Woah!!! Blogging goals….

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  15. Very powerful… abortion is a nightmare…

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  16. powerful…………i agree with you………..this is cruel and inhumane……….people need to be careful……its not their choice alone. 🙂 🙂
    and going by the time of me reading this……i am definitely going to have nightmares……

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  17. Yeah true the pain is so true and untold. People just do it just for their selfish reasons. Too brutal. Wish all hospitals just say no to this. Many don’t get a baby and there are ppl who are just doing this. Sad though.
    Meena

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  18. Deep with profound pain.

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  19. Painfully deep expressed. Great potential of short writing.

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  20. Reblogged this on Incredible Pie and commented:
    Even an unborn deserves Love, why just keep it limited……Make Love, Give love but inhumane acts may not always justify your actions… It’s better to PROTECT yourself, if you aren’t ready for the responsibilities…. Very Bold Post👍 Must Read…and Share as well

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  21. The bitter fact is that people want to make love, but hate responsibilities…. and in a way they even turn inhumane at times. These atrocities have been inflicting the society since long. Bold writing👍

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  22. Omg!! Fabulous on writing Ms Akhila…👏👏👏
    This is more like of i dreamt in nights also😛

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  23. Omg, you wrote such a powerful piece against foetus foeticide…
    *Applause* 😊

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  24. I always wonder how can a loving mother could allow her body to be place of such brutality…

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  25. Oh God! You made so ghastly!

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  26. OMG that is just so brutal, could hardly complete reading it.
    What a disgraceful act by humans.

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