I always imagined your shining eyes welcoming me to my new home. I thought there was deep love in your heart. I was eagerly waiting for that day to happen.
But all of a sudden, it occurred..
I saw something coming towards me. I haven’t seen such a thing ever in my life. I smiled at it. But it didn’t smile back. Instead it hugged me, hugged me so tightly that I couldn’t breathe at all. I couldn’t understand what was happening to me. The sharp objects crushed me completely.
Still I donno why did you deny my arrival in to your world? And finally why did you cut me into pieces? Can you ever guess the pain I felt? Physically as well as mentally you hurt me so badly.
Your right to make decisions deprived me of my right to life. You misunderstood that I feel nothing and understand nothing. You never heard me screaming while you killed me brutally. The pain will be back to haunt you if you ever know my scream.
November 21, 2016 at 4:49 pm
This piece tore at my heart, Akhila! You have brought out a topic that is more suppressed than spoken about.
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November 22, 2016 at 10:59 am
thanks Pranitha..ya might be a suppressed topic as it is sensitive and hurting some hearts.
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November 22, 2016 at 6:41 pm
Yes!
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November 21, 2016 at 1:16 pm
Terrific rendering!
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November 21, 2016 at 1:18 pm
hmmm….
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November 21, 2016 at 1:19 pm
Oh no.. Sorry!
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November 21, 2016 at 1:20 pm
EHH.. WHY.?
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November 21, 2016 at 1:22 pm
May be this piece of writing inspired from people you might know ( If not well and good ) having said that.. Scream of an unborn.. keep this on record, something similar might release in youtube soon with a different perspective. I will update!
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November 21, 2016 at 1:26 pm
inspired from a recent news read..court allowed a girl to abort her baby after a rape..might be for her good.. but the unborn scream behind that news haunted me a lot..
waiting for your video..
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November 21, 2016 at 1:27 pm
Oh! Sure.
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November 21, 2016 at 11:29 am
I’m having goose bumps while reading it…A very powerful message that no one has right to violate the right of a new life to enter this world!!
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November 21, 2016 at 12:04 pm
thanks meenakshi…hope the message is spread in the right way..
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November 21, 2016 at 12:08 pm
Absolutely correct message and I agree with you! Decision of bringing or not bringing a child should be taken before conceiving.
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November 21, 2016 at 10:54 am
Tbh its hard reading something like that when you have miscarried because its makes us think back to what we have been trying to heal from but know that we probably never will .
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November 21, 2016 at 10:50 am
Can you guys check out my blog pleaseee :p thanksss
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November 21, 2016 at 1:16 pm
will check..
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November 20, 2016 at 11:44 pm
I’m sorry. I can’t agree with this post… Your choices and feelings regarding abortion are your own, but imagine reading something like this if you have ever had an abortion or miscarried… it doesn’t bear thinking about.
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November 21, 2016 at 10:53 am
yes.. it’s my opinion. i cant bear people suffering even if it is an unborn..
but of course i can understand the perspective you are referring to.
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November 21, 2016 at 3:06 pm
I understand it’s your opinion 🙂 & no harm meant by sharing mine.
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November 22, 2016 at 11:06 am
infact i am thankful to you …
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November 20, 2016 at 9:31 pm
I wish people may understand the pain.
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November 21, 2016 at 10:53 am
yesss… let them hear that silent scream
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November 20, 2016 at 9:27 pm
That packed one hell of a wallop! Also amazingly honest! I was almost left speechless. 😮
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November 21, 2016 at 10:55 am
let us spread the awareness..and wish for less silent screams in future..
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November 20, 2016 at 9:18 pm
Let your words open up our minds☺…topic which everyone needs to have a deeper dig,those are real nightmares😑
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November 21, 2016 at 11:09 am
thanks Ashik…i know i must have hurt some girls emotions.. but i couldnt resist posting this..
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November 20, 2016 at 6:11 pm
I am shocked at the cruelty of people…it’s a sin. 😨😱
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November 21, 2016 at 11:15 am
yes mann… it’s a sin whatever maybe the causes
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November 20, 2016 at 3:28 pm
A sensitive topic beautifully written.
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November 21, 2016 at 11:16 am
thanks mvs.. hmm.. sensitive.. i know i might have hurt someone
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November 20, 2016 at 2:16 pm
I am with you 100% but won’t it be worse for the child to be born and not cared for.. what about those screams that come ..
It is a very difficult to see what is right or wrong. But nevertheless it is sad very sad…
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November 21, 2016 at 11:20 am
yes, bikram..good or bad, right or wrong, boon or bane.. everything based on perspectives…. still how can we have shut our ears towards the scream of an unborn
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November 20, 2016 at 1:27 pm
This is painful ,well if doesn’t want the baby .They should look for the means which can prevent this.
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November 20, 2016 at 1:28 pm
yes.. but when lust overrules the humanity, the evilness come into picture..
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November 20, 2016 at 1:54 pm
Yes !that’s brutual indeed
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November 20, 2016 at 1:18 pm
Btw the thing you wrote is so accurate that it hurts….. Damn The society….
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November 20, 2016 at 1:30 pm
hmm..atleast 50 % f such murders could have been prevented if the people can hear those silent screams..
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November 20, 2016 at 1:31 pm
If only….
I always wondered what goes through the mother while killing her baby
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November 20, 2016 at 1:16 pm
71 likes in 23 minutes….. Woah!!! Blogging goals….
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November 20, 2016 at 1:36 pm
ha ha..nope yar.. it was a repost.. so might be 23 + hours..
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November 20, 2016 at 8:34 pm
Besides you are blogging since 1885 so…. We can actually expect these kind of achievements
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November 21, 2016 at 11:09 am
lol
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November 21, 2016 at 7:28 pm
Yea I am very funny… Am I not?
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November 19, 2016 at 11:39 pm
Very powerful… abortion is a nightmare…
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November 20, 2016 at 12:19 pm
yes it is..but unfortunately it cannt be banned or wont be banned completely.
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November 20, 2016 at 12:22 pm
in cases of rape its a boon…. but otherwise….
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November 20, 2016 at 12:25 pm
hmm… can argue it as a boon or bane even in case of a rape..why the innocent child should suffer..
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November 20, 2016 at 1:22 pm
that’s entirely a person’s own prerogative dear… cant argue there. it was just a thought. whether they want to live with the living memory of a heinous crime or terminate it… its a persons own choice… cant dictate terms here. one has to raped first to be a judge on that
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November 20, 2016 at 1:27 pm
true.. it depends..
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November 20, 2016 at 1:29 pm
Yes but I’m against girls getting carelessly into a physical relationship and then going in for an abortion…. if you have to get physical… fine. But be careful.
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November 20, 2016 at 1:34 pm
hmm…it is a world where there is no boundaries for lust…it’s shameful
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November 19, 2016 at 10:37 pm
powerful…………i agree with you………..this is cruel and inhumane……….people need to be careful……its not their choice alone. 🙂 🙂
and going by the time of me reading this……i am definitely going to have nightmares……
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November 20, 2016 at 12:26 pm
nightmares.for you..hmm…
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November 20, 2016 at 1:16 pm
Still couldn’t think beyond myself……….i need some help………a lot of us do….
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November 20, 2016 at 1:35 pm
ya.. people do this, support the abortion .. reasons could be many, and justifiable in their words…but why the unborn suffer..?
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November 20, 2016 at 1:44 pm
True…….and i will be honest…….i am not going to bear a child in this life……so i will never have a personal insight in this matter…….and i do not have a clear resolve in this……..i do think that there should be some freedom for a woman to be able to chose……..but gender discrimination is wrong and nothing can justify that……again i do not know what i am talking about……..
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November 19, 2016 at 10:16 pm
Yeah true the pain is so true and untold. People just do it just for their selfish reasons. Too brutal. Wish all hospitals just say no to this. Many don’t get a baby and there are ppl who are just doing this. Sad though.
Meena
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November 20, 2016 at 12:27 pm
yes, meena its pathetic whatever may be the underlying reasons..
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November 19, 2016 at 9:47 pm
Nice..
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November 19, 2016 at 9:30 pm
Deep with profound pain.
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November 20, 2016 at 12:28 pm
ya…it’s a painful thing happening millions of times in the world in a year.
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November 19, 2016 at 5:56 pm
Painfully deep expressed. Great potential of short writing.
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November 20, 2016 at 12:30 pm
thanks masoom..yes, it is painful
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November 19, 2016 at 4:46 pm
Reblogged this on Incredible Pie and commented:
Even an unborn deserves Love, why just keep it limited……Make Love, Give love but inhumane acts may not always justify your actions… It’s better to PROTECT yourself, if you aren’t ready for the responsibilities…. Very Bold Post👍 Must Read…and Share as well
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November 20, 2016 at 12:55 pm
thanks a lot for the reblog vivek.
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November 19, 2016 at 4:41 pm
The bitter fact is that people want to make love, but hate responsibilities…. and in a way they even turn inhumane at times. These atrocities have been inflicting the society since long. Bold writing👍
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November 20, 2016 at 12:56 pm
thanks vivek..ya.. when love/lust and responsibilities are not in sync, the things appear inhumane..
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November 19, 2016 at 4:13 pm
Omg!! Fabulous on writing Ms Akhila…👏👏👏
This is more like of i dreamt in nights also😛
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November 20, 2016 at 12:58 pm
thanks Prashant..
let the eyes be opened towards this bitter fact..
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November 19, 2016 at 1:59 pm
Omg, you wrote such a powerful piece against foetus foeticide…
*Applause* 😊
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November 19, 2016 at 2:03 pm
thanks Harsh…normally while saying thanks, we should be happy.. but this time, I am not at all happy as these kinds of brutal murders haunt me so badly
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November 19, 2016 at 2:04 pm
Yes Di, whenever I hear such cases, i think like “who gave them the right to snatch someone’s right to life”
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November 19, 2016 at 2:09 pm
true that..even if the fetus can feel the pain or not, no one has that right to snatch their lives..
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November 19, 2016 at 12:29 pm
I always wonder how can a loving mother could allow her body to be place of such brutality…
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November 19, 2016 at 1:39 pm
hmm.. still it happens in this world knowingly or unknowingly..
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November 19, 2016 at 12:22 pm
Powerful writing!
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November 19, 2016 at 1:40 pm
thanks. have a great day
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November 19, 2016 at 11:49 am
Oh God! You made so ghastly!
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November 19, 2016 at 1:44 pm
recently read a news , the court allowing an unmarried mother to abort her unborn , considering her mental conditions. I think it happened when the fetus was 20 weeks or more. As per science the baby can really really feel the pain if it is 20 weeks old..so sad, no..
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November 19, 2016 at 4:37 pm
It is a sad thing to do, but in cases like this one don’t you think it is better than bringing a life in this big bad world and having no one to tend to it?
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November 20, 2016 at 12:57 pm
frankly speaking i donno…but why the innocent child.. that’s what painful..
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November 19, 2016 at 9:53 am
hmmmm….
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November 19, 2016 at 1:48 pm
hmmm…many silent murders in the world, no..
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November 21, 2016 at 7:20 am
so true…but
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November 21, 2016 at 10:07 am
i know why this but now..
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November 21, 2016 at 10:22 am
hmmm… you tell, why the ‘why’ ??
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November 21, 2016 at 10:34 am
‘but’ could be to save her who is mentally /physically unprepared..
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November 21, 2016 at 10:36 am
hey..akhila!! cheers(exactly the same thought).. gb
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November 21, 2016 at 10:39 am
gb..?
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November 21, 2016 at 10:44 am
God Bless…
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November 19, 2016 at 9:18 am
OMG that is just so brutal, could hardly complete reading it.
What a disgraceful act by humans.
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November 19, 2016 at 1:46 pm
ya..it is damn brutal…..millions and millions of abortions are happening in a year in the world.. who cares about the scream of those unborns…
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November 19, 2016 at 9:13 am
A poignant piece Akhila!
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November 19, 2016 at 1:47 pm
Thanks Radhi…But a bitter fact in the world..
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