Words and Notion

Words Whipping up Whimsical Waves of Notion

കാര്‍മുകില്‍ വിരഹം

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എന്നെപ്പുണരും കാര്‍മുകില്‍ വിരഹമൊരു

മഴയായെങ്കിലെന്നേറെ കൊതിച്ചു ഞാന്‍

പാതി കൂമ്പിയ മിഴികളേറെ പണിപ്പെട്ടു

തുറന്നിട്ടുമൊന്നും കാണാനില്ലാതുഴന്നു ഞാന്‍

ഇരുട്ടിനെ ഭേദിച്ചൊരു മിന്നല്പ്പിണരായെന്‍

പ്രാണന്‍ പുറത്തിറങ്ങിയെങ്കില്‍….

..രാവന്തിയോളം നിന്നെത്തേടിയലഞ്ഞൊരു

രാപ്പാടി പിന്നെയും നിശബ്ദമായ് പാടീ:

“നിന്‍റെ മാര്‍ഗ്ഗം പ്രണയമോ പ്രതികാരമോ,

എന്തിനെന്നെ നീ കൊല്ലാതെ കൊല്ലുന്നു”

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Author: Akhila

I am flying across the space between words and whipping up whimsical waves of notion to discern the quantum code of my soul.

72 thoughts on “കാര്‍മുകില്‍ വിരഹം

  1. ആശംസകള്‍

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  2. Sathyangalokke arinjeedumenkilum dukham varumbol karanju pokunnu….. But, this girl is good. A hi-fi to you akhila. However, i felt the kavitha is not over…. so…

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  3. Interesting question posed by the nightingale!

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  4. I think your Malayalam posts have an edge over the English 🙂 Concise and enjoyable.

    Sometime it is difficult to understand Whether it is revenge or love.

    But always be positive separations help to grow the love deep inside the heart.

    Muhabbat bhi zarrori di, Bichadna bhi zarrori di 🙂

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  5. Okay, you meant to say ❤❤ 😋

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  6. Umm.. I don’t know What it means but it must be something nice.. great post 😁

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  7. “very nice embroidery” 😀

    that’s what i can say as i can’t read this language :p and i was looking for translation in comments lol

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  8. Secret language..secret message..not able to decode it😐😵😵

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  9. Raappadiyude paatu kollam….nannayittundu ma’am akhila

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  10. GM, Akhila. This post looks like it is only for a few. How to understand this language so just look at the alphabets.

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  11. Really enjoyed looking at the post 🙂 🙂

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