The perfect Date

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The gentle breeze giggled me as if I was in his arms

Two little silver liquid drops caressed my face

Enjoying the naughty wind teasing my curls

He loomed with two cups of coffee in his hands

Placing it on the balcony desk, hugged me from back

Closed my eyes, leaning upon his heart as always

Is this not the perfect date – two cups of coffee,

You and me, our balcony, the sneak hug and the rain?

I couldn’t resist bringing in this sweet definition here, from the magic of a special tea .

Such an expressive meaning, clinging to the real life. Kudos Josh…

167 responses to “The perfect Date”

  1. Savvysaav Avatar

    Love this!!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you.have a great time

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  3. 'VIN.."O"..D'iesel.... #Mr.Crazy😇 Avatar

    Hmmmm…..!!!I will definetly make my #PRINCESS happy by doing the above things…& I will end our #ROMANTIC day with a #CANDLE LIGHT DINNER…for both of us….
    Thank u for d romantic post…

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      i am quite sure that your princess will find the most precious moments during then

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  4. prashantt Avatar
    prashantt

    Oh! Am i stepped in to some other blogger page😉
    This is so lovely crafted words rather than someone with fire & fierce words.Loved reading it👏👌👌

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      fire and fierce words became blushing.. he he….and i recommend you to read the “magic of tea” which i mentioned in that post..

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      1. prashantt Avatar
        prashantt

        I read the whole post…the romantic rain,balcony & cup of hot tea…that’s the reason i thought i barged in to some other blog,you should write more like this😊

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          more like this…ha, have you read my blog description…

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          1. prashantt Avatar
            prashantt

            Seriously!!!…Words & Notion isn’t it….so every genre of writing has some sort of notion & see how beautifully you came up with this.:)

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              voh nahi…the description which we add..

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              1. prashantt Avatar
                prashantt

                Oho!! Thats a link right.. i missed to read…Chai biscuit,will come back to you after reading it.

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  5. Infinite Living Avatar

    Yes, sounds perfect!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot…😊

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      1. Infinite Living Avatar

        You are most welcome!

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  6. Wandering Soul Avatar

    Loved this. What a beautiful, evocative, way of expressing simple but deep romance! I could actually picture it in my mind.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      really happy as you could feel it in your mind.. make it happen..;)

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  7. Shalini Sharrma Avatar

    Yes, yes perfect date ❤❤

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      yyoo..yyoo

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  8. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    Akhila u r an awesome writer. So beautifully u have written. Simply marvellous u r an inspiration to poetry.👍👍👍👍👍😊😊😊😊😊😊

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      oh.. so sweet words… it is not the beauty of my words, but, the beauty of that simple pleasure

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      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        But let me tell you Akhila the beauty that you put is amazing. I just want to tell u one more thing Akhila someone has nominated me but I don’t know how to go about it can u help me pl.

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          what nomination.. for a date..;)

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          1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

            One Aliz92 has selected me and I am sending u what he sent me. Kindly see pl. Really enjoyed reading all that you’ve put out so far, and I’m looking forward to reading more of what you have to say! Anyways, I nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award, which I do hope you accept!🙂
            https://allthebeautifultimes.wordpress.com/2016/09/22/the-blogger-recognition-award-and-the-sunshine-blogger-award-thanks/

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              ohkay.. I read that link..and as you know there are certain rules to be followed which is listed in that post. just make a replica of that post, and add your answers to that.. and nominate new people for the award.
              and in my case, i made this an awardfree blog…so please…https://wordsandnotion.wordpress.com/2016/01/30/dont-think-me-rude-as-i-made-it-an-award-free-blog/

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              1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

                thanks for everything Akhila will do as u have told me.

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  9. Akhila Avatar

    have a book too.. as Aisha said…

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  10. Puneet Avatar

    That was such a beautiful moment. 😊

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      not was, but ‘is’ and always…;)

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      1. Puneet Avatar

        Ah.. That will remain alive in memories so yeah it can be called “is” also.

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  11. aishahnaaz Avatar

    Thanks akhila for changing it to coffee😍😍😍😍 you see that Josh?? 😝😝😝
    This is so wow by the way!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      ha ha…you are a coffee fan , right..for a punch, i changed it to coffee…

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      1. aishahnaaz Avatar

        Yeah. I’m a coffee lover! I don’t drink chai, where the tea powder meets milk/milk powder. 😅 Whereas everyone else in my home are chai people. 😀 So we always have fights on what is better. 😂😂 I love suleimani and green tea though.

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          ya.. sulaimani is a good option especially after a heavy meals..

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          1. aishahnaaz Avatar

            Yeah!! Suleimani/coffee with a book on balcony/window is my favourite! 😍 And rain to add flavour..

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              ha ha…you made your date..

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              1. aishahnaaz Avatar

                Yeah! Books are my dates 😉

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            2. Josh Avatar

              Ohh pinne oru parishkaari vannekanu :p

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              1. aishahnaaz Avatar

                Pavam akhila de post l comment cheyth alambundakalla. 🙈😅

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  numma, evide poyalum, inganokke thanne.. athanne mallu specialty..

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                  1. aishahnaaz Avatar

                    Sathyam!! 😂😂

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              2. Akhila Avatar

                rofl….

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                1. Josh Avatar

                  Molikuttikk Karyam pidikitty 😛

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                  1. Akhila Avatar

                    enneyangu kollu…

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                    1. Josh Avatar

                      He he 🙂 ** Never ever say that ever..even if you don’t mean it**

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                    2. Akhila Avatar

                      ;)..

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        2. Josh Avatar

          Chai people nu entha koyappam.. Chai chai zindabaad!

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          1. aishahnaaz Avatar

            😂😂😂

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    2. Josh Avatar

      Edo Aishu .. milk powder chaya Alla.. inj nalla paal chaya kudichikka ? Anyways coffee valya teams intte drink aan 😀 pinne suliamani lemon add cheytha inj e parayuna coffee intt katha kazhiyum :p

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      1. aishahnaaz Avatar

        Njan nalla palchaya kudichk tta. Nte veetil indakana athra strong and best chaya vere edem kitula. Pashe nik athinte taste ishtalla. Palum chayapodim koodya taste. Kattan kudikum, suleimani ne pati koykott kari noda parayne 😅😅😅 njan velya team onnualle 🙈🙊

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          shooo..enthoru samadhanam kozhikkodan slang l vayikkan…jai jai kozhikode…

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          1. Josh Avatar

            Appo inggakk Thalasseri slang kannedutha kandude 😛

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            1. aishahnaaz Avatar

              Thalassery slang nod koypandaytalla, Koykod nod oru extra feeling nne llu 😅😅

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              1. Josh Avatar

                :/

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            2. Akhila Avatar

              anakku kozhappilla..aishu paranjonam, orithu’…

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          2. aishahnaaz Avatar

            Zindabad!

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            1. Josh Avatar

              Veruthe oru kaaryam illand, vadi koduth adi medichu ** entte oru karyam **

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              1. aishahnaaz Avatar

                😂😂😂😂

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              2. Akhila Avatar

                thalassery nnu bomb umayi varillenkil, we kozhikodians are ready to accept the neighbor people too…

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                1. Josh Avatar

                  Oho ninga randalum Kozhikod hai hi ho howw!! arinjilla :/

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                  1. Akhila Avatar

                    pakachupoyi ente balyam.. ennu koode cherkku..

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                    1. Josh Avatar

                      enthooooo!! athe enne aaro vilikunnud.. nja pinee varame 😛

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                    2. Akhila Avatar

                      ;)…

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                2. Josh Avatar

                  Chumma!! njagal vishunu polum padakkam pottikarilla.. pediyaa …

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                  1. Akhila Avatar

                    thanne.. thanne…

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  12. radhikasreflection Avatar

    Who needs a candle light dinner to have a romantic time. Coffee with your loved one is also so special. Lovely !!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      True…the most special…

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  13. Joker Shayar Avatar

    Endearing !

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Shayar

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      1. Joker Shayar Avatar

        Pleasure 🙂 and you can call me bunny :p

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          oh..okay.. I remember you mentioning it earlier, on that escaped one post..

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          1. Joker Shayar Avatar

            honestly i don’t remember that :P.. but i remember you commenting on my ‘About section’ for my name’s reverse abbreviations :D..

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              ya.. you are right.. in the about page…

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              1. Joker Shayar Avatar

                exactly 🙂

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  14. girlandworld Avatar

    Beautiful.. As usual

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks a lot…:)

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  15. Sonali@foodtravelandmakeup Avatar
    Sonali@foodtravelandmakeup

    Lovely words…

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Sonali..really appreciating your words

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  16. Bikramjit Avatar
    Bikramjit

    Blisssssss. ..

    Dream come true for sure….

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      he he…thank you.. thank you…

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  17. elaine Avatar

    Small things do make our life valuable and we mostly neglect to see how important they are and the people who create such happiness in our lifes 🙂

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    1. Josh Avatar

      But in my case, Akhila saw my small effort and acknowledge it 🙂 **Akhila..no buttering okay, i mean it**

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      1. elaine Avatar

        🙂

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      2. Akhila Avatar

        nothing to be added in asterisk..your words speak for you genuinely.. 🙂

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    2. Akhila Avatar

      you are right Elaine..just we need to have an eye to appreciate those little things while going behind big big dreams

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      1. elaine Avatar

        🙂

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  18. shreyans Avatar

    it really seems perfect..nicely written
    shreyans

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Shreyans..even though i was not much satisfied with the way i depicted it, your words soothes me

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      1. shreyans Avatar

        that is why it was perfect..

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  19. The Insider Avatar

    Lovely 👆👌

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thank you..:)

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  20. Vivek Vatsal1 Avatar

    Wao!!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thank you vivek..have a good day and a perfect date

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  21. parijat shukla Avatar
    parijat shukla

    You have written it very beautifully and i believe you frequently go on such dates :). What will those do who dont drink tea or coffee ? 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      shhhhh……….

      and a cup of hot water for who dont drink drink coffee or tea

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      1. parijat shukla Avatar
        parijat shukla

        two times you mention drinks !! what was on on your mind ? 🙂

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          ha ha…whatever you wish to drink…

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  22. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

    hmmmmm…perfect, ma’am akhila

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      yayy.. thank you.. thank you

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      1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

        pleasure, perfect pleasure

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    2. Akhila Avatar

      no ‘but’ this time…;)

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      1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

        actually i liked it..especially since he had the presence of mind to keep the coffee mugs safely down before venturing to hug! spilled coffee would have marred the perfect occasion.
        also liked the ‘leaning on his heart’ part

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          ha ha…your observation…

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  23. Sakthi Avatar

    It’s a perfect date!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Sakthi…have a great day

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      1. Sakthi Avatar

        You too!

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  24. cta Avatar

    I really love it.

    The day dream 


    Please read, like and comment!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thank you.. will definitely read your day dream

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  25. Shreya Sharma Avatar

    Wow. Lovely. 😍 I loved this date. ❤

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Shreya…yes, the best date…wish you to have it soon..;)

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      1. Shreya Sharma Avatar

        hehe nope.
        dont wanna fall in this trap. 😛

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          oh.. no.. i am quite sure, one day you will let me know that you are trapped..;)

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          1. Shreya Sharma Avatar

            hahaha
            I think you are right. 😛 ❤

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              see, there is a secret mush going on, even though unsaid…

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              1. Shreya Sharma Avatar

                ahaan.. No

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  😉

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  26. Josh Avatar

    Oh my! Am so much honoured! To getting featured in your website🙂 and yeah this is like best thing can happen to any artists, when the reader take it as there own..it completes the efforts of the writer!! Thank you so much Akhila for this stunningly kind gesture🙂

    Josh

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      I am always behind such simple pleasures of life, as you defined in that perfect date.. so while i read it, i just felt it as reflection of my own mind.. and definitely the credit goes to you as the writer in you defined it in the best way..

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      1. Josh Avatar

        Agree, Life when we observe it in milliseconds, filtering it down to that point, where we can hear those seconds tick! that’s where we can feel the beauty of life, its about celebrating simple things while we conquer and aim for ambitious dreams, life is beautiful, when we actually, talk, listen and appreciate, in those tables, am really sacred of these gadgets and apps which are enslaving our thoughts, to strangling our options to be human! **when i say that am not in whatsapps they gave me that look like am being transported from 17th century, am one though, feeling completely lost**

        (Ho entta ammo, sorry for such an emotionally driven comment)

        Thanks a lot, feels like recognized for my work 🙂

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          yaa,… i can read a lot from your comment….dont be bothered on the emotional part..
          pinne, enne angine valya pulliyonnumm akkenda, too…;)

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          1. Josh Avatar

            You are **One Valya Sambavam** when i read your post related to Science&Technology my fuse goes off, i just read you and the fellow bloggers debating **with an awe (Jaws dropped)**

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              1. Josh Avatar

                Haha!! 😀

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  vayicho..??

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                  1. Josh Avatar

                    Valya alugal valya varthanam 🙂 Reading!

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                    1. Akhila Avatar

                      shoo….i’m leaving…

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                    2. Josh Avatar

                      Haha 😀

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            1. elaine Avatar

              i do agree with u Josh, ente fuse pokaarundu sci post of Akhila vaayichittu (sorry Akhila don’t take it as a discouraging opinion), njan mikkavaarum oru 3 times enggilum vaayikkum. Appozha oru realization varunnathu, how little i know ennu 🙂

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              1. Josh Avatar

                He he Satyam 🙂

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                1. elaine Avatar

                  🙂
                  Josh, thallu kollaathe odenddi varumo :p

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                  1. Josh Avatar

                    Njan aah Jilla vittu oru manikoor munne 😀

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                    1. elaine Avatar

                      when we travel in ship, they give security classes, they say in case of emergency evacuation. We have to loudly say “Abandon Ship” and jump into sea with our life jacket on.
                      Njanum appo “abandon ship…abandon ship” 😀

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                    2. Josh Avatar

                      He he!! But If your the Captain you can’t abandon the ship 🙂

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                    3. elaine Avatar

                      haha
                      athu point appo pinne pani vaangghum :p

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                    4. Josh Avatar

                      He he…. most respectable scene and the captain * TITANIC*

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                    5. Josh Avatar

                      Wow! Ships always Fascinates me, you travel in it how great is that.. you a Marine ?

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                    6. elaine Avatar

                      I traveled very few since my PhD (marine science) work is more to coastal area…in future i might be a full time oceanography researcher 🙂

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                    7. Josh Avatar

                      Wow! Interesting all the best with your future endeavours! Great to meet you too from a different field of work and study 🙂

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                    8. elaine Avatar

                      thanks dear…best wishes to u too 🙂

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                    9. Josh Avatar

                      Thank you Elaine!

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                    10. elaine Avatar

                      🙂

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                2. Akhila Avatar

                  grrrrrrrrrr

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              2. Akhila Avatar

                ayyooo.. you tooo joining with him to tease me……

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                1. elaine Avatar

                  🙂

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              3. Akhila Avatar

                pinney, eppozhum ore pole ezhutharuthennu ente keyboard warned me.. what should i do..;)

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                1. Josh Avatar

                  Keyboard mattiya mathi 😛

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                  1. Akhila Avatar

                    but now my hands are also tuned to .. iniyippo, hands um mattanam ennu parayalle..

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                    1. Josh Avatar

                      🙂

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                2. elaine Avatar

                  hahaha….keyboard inu Akhila’s brain effect kitti ennaa thonnunney 😀

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                  1. Akhila Avatar

                    😉

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                    1. elaine Avatar

                      🙂

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                    2. Akhila Avatar

                      i never thought that you are a mallu when we met first.. but, in this DP, no doubt about this kollam girl..

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                    3. elaine Avatar

                      hahaha…numma eppozhum varietyude aalaanu 😉 veettil poyaappo palliyil onnu poyekkaam ennu karuthi…ammayude saree kadameduthu :p athukondu little sis inte kayyum kaalum pidichu oru photom oppichu 😉 :p

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                    4. Akhila Avatar

                      ha ha.. ROFL….

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                    5. elaine Avatar

                      😀

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                    6. elaine Avatar

                      Josh ara manikkoor munpe scoot aayi ennu parayaan paranjju :p

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                    7. Akhila Avatar

                      ha ha… pakarathinu aale ivide nirtheettalle poyathu…

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                    8. elaine Avatar

                      😀 athe athe :p

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                    9. Akhila Avatar

                      pinney..nammude childhood romance okke evide ethi..pinne kandillallo..

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                    10. elaine Avatar

                      athuu ezhuthanam ennu undu half way written aanu next part, but idakku vere orupaadu threads varunna kaaranam time adjust cheyyaan pattiyillaa 😦 athu ezhuthi complete cheyyanam…

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                    11. Akhila Avatar

                      and also, post something on your ship experience.. variety is your haemoglobin right..

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                    12. elaine Avatar

                      അയ്യോ ഞാൻ വാള് വച്ച് പട്ടിയായ കഥ നാട്ടുകാരെ അറിയിക്കണോ … കുറച്ചു എന്ധോക്കെയോ ആ സമയത്തു കുത്തികുറിച്ചിരുന്നു കാരണം ചുറ്റും ഉള്ളത് കടല് മാത്രമായിരുന്നു കൂട്ടിനു ഒരു seagull ഉം ആ കപ്പലിലെ ഏക പെൺകൊടി ഞാൻ ആയിരുന്നു ….

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                    13. Akhila Avatar

                      he he…

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                    14. elaine Avatar

                      🙂

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  27. MultidimensionalHE Avatar
    MultidimensionalHE

    Perfection. Hugging my lady that way is dream I want to come true.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      why it’s a dream.. make it happen…

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      1. MultidimensionalHE Avatar
        MultidimensionalHE

        Yea right. I already tried.

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