Raising the curtains

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I was charged like an electron to shock anyone

when people applauded on my brainpower.

I was overwhelmed in proudness to envy anyone

when every data danced in the way I sang.

My proudness touched the boundary of universe

when I solved toughest of tough problem.

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But I failed to read the enigmas of the world

The material world of pains and worries.

I failed to detach the fake belief and it adopted

The whole world as it is seen in my eyes.

I failed to read the harsh realities outside my walls.

My mistake to misread it as the real world.

Now, I realise I was an empty shell so far, which

Failed to catch the lives outside my curtains.

61 responses to “Raising the curtains”

  1. Naynesh Pasari's Blog Avatar

    great one

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks naynesh

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  2. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

    Nice one ma’am..

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      hari…good morning…i thought you vanished..;)

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      1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

        poyalum poyaalum evidam vare povum

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          if i had a chance i would have made a visit to the boundary of universe.

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          1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

            hahahaha….

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  3. Nisthur Anadi Avatar
    Nisthur Anadi

    Being empty and nothing is sheer bliss !

    Beautiful write !😊

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      😊😊

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  4. Alok Singhal Avatar

    Not your fault, work is topsy-turvy these days!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      true that.. thanks Alok for understanding…

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  5. Beparvah !! Avatar
    Beparvah !!

    isolation is the best companion… i presume!!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      ha ha.. i can understand … isolation is the best companion, but not always

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      1. Beparvah !! Avatar
        Beparvah !!

        i believe , it depends on the personality of the person and the circumstances he or is used to … 🙂 🙂
        least chance of being betrayed …!!!

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          true that…have a great time my friend…

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          1. Beparvah !! Avatar
            Beparvah !!

            yeah.. i will try that friend !!
            thank you for being there ! 🙂

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              ha ha.. chandrajit, for the first time, i am getting reply as “I will try that friend”.. i can understand what you meant…but still made me smile…

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              1. Beparvah !! Avatar
                Beparvah !!

                ha ha ha .. bang on !!!
                it was intended.. 🙂 🙂

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  he he..lol..

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                  1. Beparvah !! Avatar
                    Beparvah !!

                    got a fracture on my right hand knuckle .. few days back.. but this conversation brought a smile 🙂
                    thank you !!

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                    1. Akhila Avatar

                      oh…get well soon…

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                    2. Beparvah !! Avatar
                      Beparvah !!

                      thank you .. 🙂

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  6. That Geek Avatar

    This is written wonderfully.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks a lot for your kind words.

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  7. elaine Avatar

    “I failed to detach the fake belief and it adopted”— realistic thought 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks Elaine.. how are you doing…didnt see your continued posts..

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      1. elaine Avatar

        hi dear…i will be doing it soon…first love is back into veins … messed up with hectic travel Goa-mumbai-kerala-goa-mumbai, in between death of grandpa, national seminar-paper presentation etc. Also first had some real life flavors…fiction life will soon be published (real life follows )
        🙂

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          awaiting the fiction life…
          sad to hear on the death of your grandpa..

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          1. elaine Avatar

            yes yes :)thank u so much for asking 🙂

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  8. Varsh Avatar

    One cannot live and prosper in isolation. You have to remove the curtains sometime. Being proud isn’t a bad thing if it doesn’t blind your judgement about yourself and others.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks varsh…and i agree with you that proudness is not a bad thing as long as it is not misleading one..

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  9. vicky Avatar
    vicky

    isn’t that beautiful that someone sees something in us more than just what meets the eye. someone appreciates the efforts we make to be loving and kind to others . to me a person who works on their personality and heart is the best human, no matter how little progress they make they are always ahead of the ones who are stuck with materialistic thoughts

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      working on personality, agreed to be the best human.. but heart, i donno..

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  10. prashantt Avatar
    prashantt

    Lovely words to chargeup on Monday blues..lol!though the words giving me a hint that the writer is an software engineer..🙏😊

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      oh….wondering what made you to guess my field..

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      1. prashantt Avatar
        prashantt

        Its all magic haha..I guessed from your poetic words here & see its bingo here!!

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          ha ha.. you are very clever…

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          1. prashantt Avatar
            prashantt

            Proton,electron,database everythings here..haha that is enough for sharp mind😛

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              ha ha…where are you working..?

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              1. prashantt Avatar
                prashantt

                I hail from hotel industry..

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                1. Akhila Avatar

                  ohaky.. i remember somewhere i read…may be in your comment section

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                  1. prashantt Avatar
                    prashantt

                    Yeah!! May be somewhere in your blog related to food…nice speaking to you & looking forward to your next post.😊

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                    1. Akhila Avatar

                      saying thanks officially..;)

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                    2. prashantt Avatar
                      prashantt

                      Haha…have a great day ahead 😊🙋

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  11. Prajakta Avatar
    Prajakta

    Very thoughtful 😊
    Pride blinds us all

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      true ..thanks prajakta .
      you are absolutely right, it is high time that we should realize our blindness.

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      1. Prajakta Avatar
        Prajakta

        Yes and it is always better to realize it earlier rather than after a fall. 😊

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          yes.. have a great time dear..

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  12. SumitOfficial Avatar

    I loved it. 😃

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks bro..
      ( in you guys language..;)

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      1. SumitOfficial Avatar

        😂😂😂😂😂

        You’re welcome bro. From now on I’ll call you bro only. 😛

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          ha ha.. rolling on the floor laughing..

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          1. SumitOfficial Avatar

            😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

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  13. pins & ashes Avatar

    Shell again? How come it is empty! It was full last time and needed a bell to break it to explore more..

    Morning kutties😍

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      ha ha.. this is anew shell, not yesterday’s…
      some shell effect going on around me..

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      1. pins & ashes Avatar

        Eating a lot of crustaceans? or your craving for the crab.. 😀 😀

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          ha ha….the vegetarian mind, but the non vegetarian body craving for crab…shhhhhhhhh..

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          1. pins & ashes Avatar

            Ente ammachi! gross!

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  14. Josh Avatar

    🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      🙂
      good morning josh

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      1. Josh Avatar

        Happy morning! 🙂

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