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Notion of the Day

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Your eyes are wide open to watch my ‘undone s’

Your mouth is simply shut to speak for my ‘done s’

But I don’t mind as far as I am playing for you

56 responses to “Notion of the Day”

  1. ssunshine14 Avatar
    ssunshine14

    Wow, that’s so true,superb Akhila 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar
      Akhila

      good morning Dhwani.. how are you doing..?

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      1. ssunshine14 Avatar
        ssunshine14

        Morning dear, I am all good
        what about you??

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        1. Akhila Avatar
          Akhila

          me too fine.. I asked specifically as you are not seen nowadays regularly.. that’s why

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          1. ssunshine14 Avatar
            ssunshine14

            Yeah was a little busy past some days, but now I’m back 🙂 🙂 🙂

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            1. Akhila Avatar
              Akhila

              okay…so welcome back..

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              1. ssunshine14 Avatar
                ssunshine14

                hehehehe thank-you 🙂 🙂

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  2. Sajda Afifi Avatar
    Sajda Afifi

    very good

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    1. Akhila Avatar
      Akhila

      thanks sajda.. I am glad with your words..

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  3. shilpamohan5 Avatar
    shilpamohan5

    Perfect😊

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    1. Akhila Avatar
      Akhila

      who is perfect…;)

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      1. shilpamohan5 Avatar
        shilpamohan5

        Hehe..dats true,noone is completely perfect..bt your lines are 100 % perfect chechee😊😍

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        1. Akhila Avatar
          Akhila

          thanks dear…

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  4. Masoom Jethwa Avatar
    Masoom Jethwa

    To frame it into a toem(p) 4+6

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    1. Akhila Avatar
      Akhila

      I dint understand..is it like, you will post iff 10 lines are there.. even then, you can.. just give try..

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      1. Masoom Jethwa Avatar
        Masoom Jethwa

        To complete the poem, where climax is conveyed

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        1. Akhila Avatar
          Akhila

          oh.. just give a try..

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  5. pins & ashes Avatar
    pins & ashes

    pishikku in appreciation!

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    1. Akhila Avatar
      Akhila

      ha ha.. angine thonnarille..?

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      1. pins & ashes Avatar
        pins & ashes

        pineee eppollum!

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        1. Akhila Avatar
          Akhila

          what’s there in this new dp.. cant identify

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          1. pins & ashes Avatar
            pins & ashes

            Haw! enne kandilla..that is me standing in front of VT, bombay

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            1. Akhila Avatar
              Akhila

              he he.. njan athu enlarge cheyyatheya nokkiyathu.. so saw a post only..

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              1. pins & ashes Avatar
                pins & ashes

                saadhaname! 😛 😛 😛 see dp on whatsapp! 😀 😀

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                1. Akhila Avatar
                  Akhila

                  haaaaaaaaaa haaaaaaaaaaaaaa…nokkatte

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                  1. pins & ashes Avatar
                    pins & ashes

                    enniyum chirikkum 😀 😀 😀

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  6. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar
    myheartbeats4ublog

    nice one, akhila.. reality of life!!!!

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    1. Akhila Avatar
      Akhila

      thanks my friend..

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      1. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar
        myheartbeats4ublog

        Pleasure, semi=virtual friend

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  7. Masoom Jethwa Avatar
    Masoom Jethwa

    Eyes that plays,
    On dreams our sense lays. 😛

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    1. Akhila Avatar
      Akhila

      thanks masoom.. and I wish if the eyes could play on senses..

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      1. Masoom Jethwa Avatar
        Masoom Jethwa

        Eyes that kills, looks so sober,
        Plays on senses, just like Hover…

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        1. Akhila Avatar
          Akhila

          awww.. beautifule lines.. why don’t’ you post it..?

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          1. Masoom Jethwa Avatar
            Masoom Jethwa

            Post where ?

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            1. Akhila Avatar
              Akhila

              your own blog.. where else..

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              1. Masoom Jethwa Avatar
                Masoom Jethwa

                Oh, but there’s only four lines I need Six more to complete 10line poem…

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                1. Akhila Avatar
                  Akhila

                  why do you want 10 lines ..?

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                2. pins & ashes Avatar
                  pins & ashes

                  why do you want 10 lines.. Mars, (thinking)

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                  1. Masoom Jethwa Avatar
                    Masoom Jethwa

                    To complete the poem, where climax is conveyed

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                    1. pins & ashes Avatar
                      pins & ashes

                      ppsst! open ended in fashion, and incomplete.. ask people to complete .. eureka?

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                    2. Masoom Jethwa Avatar
                      Masoom Jethwa

                      Asking Akila madam and Pins madam to suggest Anti climax of the lines. Pls atleast 2lines from you twoo…..

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                    3. Akhila Avatar
                      Akhila

                      from where this ‘madam’ came in..?

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                    4. Masoom Jethwa Avatar
                      Masoom Jethwa

                      Nowhere but I added for request

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                    5. Akhila Avatar
                      Akhila

                      he he…

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                    6. pins & ashes Avatar
                      pins & ashes

                      Jethwa Sir, you want me to rhyme like in kumbh mela! 😀 😀

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                    7. Masoom Jethwa Avatar
                      Masoom Jethwa

                      Nope, just something unusaul that’s opposite of local end… Ulta pulta… 🔫

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                    8. pins & ashes Avatar
                      pins & ashes

                      Akhila madam he is making me work on a Saturday! weep weep

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                    9. Akhila Avatar
                      Akhila

                      let us protest…

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                    10. pins & ashes Avatar
                      pins & ashes

                      in proper Mal way!

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                    11. Akhila Avatar
                      Akhila

                      ha ha.. but can he understand the mal way..?

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                    12. pins & ashes Avatar
                      pins & ashes

                      we’ll teach him! 😀 😀 Btw Mars what are the four lines.. I see only 2.

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                    13. Akhila Avatar
                      Akhila

                      ha ha.. that’s what suprith says about my stuffs…did you feel so ash about my post..?

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                    14. pins & ashes Avatar
                      pins & ashes

                      I think you are mad on most days! like high on something.. 😀 almost like me..

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                    15. Akhila Avatar
                      Akhila

                      ha ha.. that’s why you could enter into my real world..yeah.. now got the answer for your question..

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                    16. pins & ashes Avatar
                      pins & ashes

                      ohho.. 😀 😀 😀 😀 chakkara ummas

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                  2. Akhila Avatar
                    Akhila

                    ha ha.. that’s what I also asked him..?

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