Words and Notion

Words Whipping up Whimsical Waves of Notion

Diamond necklace

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A diamond necklace adorned me

Awesome, my mirror called me

Overwhelmed in proudness

Enjoyed the envious eyes around me

Until I found two blind eyes staring at me

Was it my own soul, masked under blindness?

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Author: Akhila

I am flying across the space between words and whipping up whimsical waves of notion to discern the quantum code of my soul.

67 thoughts on “Diamond necklace

  1. Soul laughed after a minute,
    And after that every cell in body ,
    Laughed heavily following soul
    Then mind said ” darling,what’s the cost of necklace in heaven”

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  2. The glitter that blinds the soul… lovely n meaningful lines Akhila β˜ΊοΈπŸ‘

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  3. It’s just amazing!!

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  4. Loved the end..go on writing dear 😊

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  5. Wonderful, keep going Akhila.

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  6. Wow… nice way to put soul as 2 blind eyes πŸ˜€

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  7. You always manage to write something thought provoking…

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  8. Nice ambiguity in the last line!

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  9. Food for thought. A very deep, thought provoking one in a few words. πŸ™‚

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  10. What do you think?
    It wasn’t me, I know for sure. πŸ˜‰

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  11. You made me to think about the reality of this world..wonderful as always! πŸ™‚

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  12. Hard-hitting! reality of today’s world! Too good πŸ™‚

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  13. Beautiful poem..”Was it my own soul, masked under blindness?” this lines are par excellence ..:)

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  14. Beautiful… Both the necklace and the poem… πŸ™‚

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  15. …look thru the veil of blindness, you may just find the soul wearing that diamond necklace!!!

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  16. Woah! What an ending. Fantastic

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  17. Wonderful poem! I like the twist at the end, makes one think πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

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  18. Do u really need a diamond necklace and a mirror to tell how beautiful your soul is ??

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  19. hmm! ippol entha paraya! inthinu oru uttaram..

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