How crazy I’m for you

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Why are you failing to read my silence?

Why don’t you know how crazy I’m for you?

Why don’t you feel that possessiveness upon me?

 

I become weak when you avoid me

I become mad and sad when my love is denied

I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.

 

Is it my fault to place myself in you?

Is it my possessiveness which enigmas me?

Is it my failure to let you know my unspoken love?

 

I can’t withstand this anymore

I can’t ever be myself without you in me

I can’t ever live without that craziness in me.

 

love

 

111 responses to “How crazy I’m for you”

  1. unsaid words Avatar

    Intense emotions akhila

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      oh.. thank you dear..

      Like

  2. K. Bellamy with a Purpose Avatar
    K. Bellamy with a Purpose

    If felt this exact way about someone before. Every line is understood on a soul level. ❤

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      why before.. not now feeling so..?

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      1. K. Bellamy with a Purpose Avatar
        K. Bellamy with a Purpose

        Feeling more love than ever before. But, I can express my love openly and freely so I don’t feel as tired. Although, I am aiming at expressing my love even more openly, and freely in the physical.

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  3. Nisthur Anadi Avatar
    Nisthur Anadi

    This ecstatically romantic , so powerful emotions read it again but loved repeating.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks a lot..love is always powerful..

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      1. Nisthur Anadi Avatar
        Nisthur Anadi

        Yeah agreed

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  4. myheartbeats4ublog Avatar

    beautifully written…. really enjoyed it.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      glad that you liked it…

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  5. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder Avatar

    This is so very romantic and yet poignant…just loved it… 🙂 Wonderfully penned…

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you so much. I am very glad with your words. When heart speaks, naturally it becomes romantic..:)

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      1. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder Avatar

        True that… 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot for thinking about me.
      But recently I made my blog an award free one. So I hope you will excuse me if I don’t participate in this..once again thank you so much for your consideration

      Like

  6. aishahnaaz Avatar

    Your writings are always deep! 🙂 and that flower, we call it thechi.
    Did I just find a malayalee?? 😀 I’m new around here and you’re the first malayalee on my list!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Oh..really. so I am that lucky gal to be first on your malayalee bloggers list. Are u living in Kerala

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      1. aishahnaaz Avatar

        Yeah! 🙂 if you think that’s lucky 😉
        Yah. I’m living in Kerala.

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          in calicut..?

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          1. aishahnaaz Avatar

            Yah!! True blue Kozhikoden 😉

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              me too from calicut..:)

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              1. aishahnaaz Avatar

                Aaha! 😀

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    2. Akhila Avatar

      Yeah, we too call it thechi

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  7. akeem54 Avatar

    Very deep and extraordinary feeling. It may also require deep patience.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      You said it right. Thanks a lot for understanding. ..☺

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  8. rabiamalik22 Avatar
    rabiamalik22

    That’s some deep stuff in the end, man ! (Y)

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you for your comment friend. Have a great time

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  9. frenchc1955 Avatar

    Thank you for following my blog.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      infact i was.. somehow it became not-followed. so did it again..:)

      Like

  10. LyfWithEm Avatar
    LyfWithEm

    This is a beautiful poem ❤

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      oh.. I am so glad that you found it beautiful.. thanks a lot friend.. have a good day!!

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  11. Darshith Badiyani Avatar

    This is perfect, Akhila ❤

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a ton. It means a lot

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  12. Nisthur Anadi Avatar
    Nisthur Anadi

    Can’t be better than this.
    It’s Akhila who can complie such beautiful words and create awesome poem.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      oh.. that’s such a lovely comment.. I am flattered.. thanks a lot..

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      1. Nisthur Anadi Avatar
        Nisthur Anadi

        Is it ? That’s so nice of you !

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      2. Nisthur Anadi Avatar
        Nisthur Anadi

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  13. jrgunner Avatar

    Keep writing!!!!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you

      Like

  14. chape Avatar

    Beautiful poem, Akhila 🙂 I wish you a year full of love so, I´ve nominated you for The One Lovely Blog Award. You can check the rules in my post 🙂 https://chapeblog.wordpress.com/2016/01/08/one-lovely-blog-award/

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Oh.. Thank you David…

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      1. chape Avatar

        You are very welcome 🙂

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  16. nimitode Avatar

    wow! i love this

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you. I am glad that you liked it

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  17. 2ndhalfolife Avatar

    Two edged sword here I believe…..

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      hmm.. true. happy that you understood.. 🙂

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  18. Jodine Avatar

    Is it meant to be ‘I’m’ or ‘I am’? Just wondering as I found this a distraction that took me away from your poem. I too have been crazy in love 🙂 Jx

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      I’m..
      same pinch on the crazy love 😉

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      1. Jodine Avatar

        Aaah I see 🙂

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    2. Akhila Avatar

      I am..

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Jodine Avatar

        Yes that looks and reads better but it’s your poem so it can be whatever you want it to be. Jx

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          🙂 🙂

          Liked by 2 people

  19. rabiyabutt Avatar

    bohat zabrdast tha

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      shukriya…:)

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      1. rabiyabutt Avatar

        🙂

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  20. ANM7 Avatar
    ANM7

    Good work, very meaningful. I get what you are saying. Investing your self into the life of another, yet no commitment has been established, and no true ritual of communication.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      yeah.. you said it.. thank you..:)

      Like

  21. noorainsobiya Avatar

    Beautifully done dear!! ❤️❤️

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks a ton dear friend..:)

      Liked by 1 person

      1. noorainsobiya Avatar

        Well deserved Hun! 😘😘

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          Oh.. I am blessed with your words sobiya

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  22. aspiringbluecat Avatar

    Very impressive!! 😀

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      really… 🙂 thank you so much. I ma happy that you liked it.. Have a great time..

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  23. Mann Kaundal Avatar
    Mann Kaundal

    Crazy kiya re!…Intense emotions…

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Ha…thanks..emotions acha hei na?

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      1. Mann Kaundal Avatar
        Mann Kaundal

        Bilkul…emotion bhi achhe he or emotions ke expression bhi.:)

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          Ahhh…so nice comment 😊

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  24. Kishan Thakar Avatar

    Perfectly described feeling of love in poetry

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you kishan. .

      Liked by 1 person

  25. bisimodupe1975 Avatar
    bisimodupe1975

    Lovely love poem Akhila!!!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot for your kind words.

      Like

  26. robertmgoldstein Avatar

    This is intense…that’s a good thing…

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks Robert..yeah.. it is intense

      Liked by 2 people

  27. thecucumbercity Avatar
    thecucumbercity

    Nice one, loved the verse “I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.”

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      thanks friend..:)

      Liked by 1 person

      1. thecucumbercity Avatar
        thecucumbercity

        Sooooo Intense 😦 ?

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          🙂

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  28. Opinionated Man Avatar

    I hope you had a great new year! 🙂

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks Jason.. Yeah.. Having a great new year.. 😉
      Wish you too a wonderful new year..

      Like

  29. Worlds Biggest Fridge Magnet Avatar

    Very good.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you so much for your kind words. Have a great day.!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Worlds Biggest Fridge Magnet Avatar

        🙂

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  30. Aneesh Sreekumar Avatar

    Nalla Varikal

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a ton Aneesh..

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Aneesh Sreekumar Avatar

        Seems that you are one crazy lover!!

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          ha ha.. secret…shhhhh….

          Liked by 1 person

  31. Nabeel Thalakkatt Avatar

    Good one 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you Nabeel.. Have a great day..

      Like

  32. Swetha M Avatar

    Intense!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you Swetha..:)

      Liked by 1 person

  33. pinkysan66 Avatar

    amazing

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you Pinky..:)

      Liked by 1 person

  34. SumitOfficial Avatar

    Wonderfully expressed, Akhila 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you Sumit 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. SumitOfficial Avatar

        You’re welcome 🙂

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  35. Visakha Avatar

    Those flowers in the snap! “Chethi poo” right?! 🙂

    Liked by 4 people

    1. Akhila Avatar

      oh.. Yea.. You identified it, Visakha.. flowers in the garden at my home 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Visakha Avatar

        😀 We got plenty of those short shrubs around our lawn too! 🙂

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        1. Akhila Avatar

          oh.. really.. I like them a lot.. easily maintainable too.. where are you living..?

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          1. Visakha Avatar

            Cochin. 🙂

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            1. Akhila Avatar

              oh.. okay..

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    2. thecucumbercity Avatar
      thecucumbercity

      We call it “Thechi” 🙂

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      1. Akhila Avatar

        Yeah. .we too call it thechi

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      2. Visakha Avatar

        Aah! Malayalam-Tamil differences!! 🙂

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  36. jncthedc Avatar

    Powerfully written with strong emotions. These sentiments are real and experienced by so many people. Sharing your poem will likely help people take emotions and translate them into actions. Well done.

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thank you so much.. You are really inspiring me to write more..:) thanks again

      Liked by 1 person

  37. Arcane Owl Avatar

    Happy new year! Wishing you the best in 2016!

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    1. Akhila Avatar

      Thanks a lot.. wish you a wonderful new year

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Arcane Owl Avatar

        🙂

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