Words and Notion

Words Whipping up Whimsical Waves of Notion

How crazy I’m for you

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Why are you failing to read my silence?

Why don’t you know how crazy I’m for you?

Why don’t you feel that possessiveness upon me?

 

I become weak when you avoid me

I become mad and sad when my love is denied

I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.

 

Is it my fault to place myself in you?

Is it my possessiveness which enigmas me?

Is it my failure to let you know my unspoken love?

 

I can’t withstand this anymore

I can’t ever be myself without you in me

I can’t ever live without that craziness in me.

 

love

 

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Author: Akhila

Flying across the space between words and whipping up whimsical waves of notion to discern the quantum code of my soul.

111 thoughts on “How crazy I’m for you

  1. If felt this exact way about someone before. Every line is understood on a soul level. ❤

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  2. This ecstatically romantic , so powerful emotions read it again but loved repeating.

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  3. beautifully written…. really enjoyed it.

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  4. This is so very romantic and yet poignant…just loved it… 🙂 Wonderfully penned…

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    • Thanks a lot for thinking about me.
      But recently I made my blog an award free one. So I hope you will excuse me if I don’t participate in this..once again thank you so much for your consideration

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  6. Your writings are always deep! 🙂 and that flower, we call it thechi.
    Did I just find a malayalee?? 😀 I’m new around here and you’re the first malayalee on my list!

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  7. Very deep and extraordinary feeling. It may also require deep patience.

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  8. That’s some deep stuff in the end, man ! (Y)

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  9. Thank you for following my blog.

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  10. This is a beautiful poem ❤

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  11. Can’t be better than this.
    It’s Akhila who can complie such beautiful words and create awesome poem.

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  12. Beautiful poem, Akhila 🙂 I wish you a year full of love so, I´ve nominated you for The One Lovely Blog Award. You can check the rules in my post 🙂 https://chapeblog.wordpress.com/2016/01/08/one-lovely-blog-award/

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  14. Two edged sword here I believe…..

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  16. Is it meant to be ‘I’m’ or ‘I am’? Just wondering as I found this a distraction that took me away from your poem. I too have been crazy in love 🙂 Jx

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  17. Good work, very meaningful. I get what you are saying. Investing your self into the life of another, yet no commitment has been established, and no true ritual of communication.

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  18. Beautifully done dear!! ❤️❤️

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  19. Crazy kiya re!…Intense emotions…

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  20. Perfectly described feeling of love in poetry

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  21. Lovely love poem Akhila!!!

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  22. This is intense…that’s a good thing…

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  23. Nice one, loved the verse “I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.”

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  24. I hope you had a great new year! 🙂

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  25. Wonderfully expressed, Akhila 🙂

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  26. Those flowers in the snap! “Chethi poo” right?! 🙂

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  27. Powerfully written with strong emotions. These sentiments are real and experienced by so many people. Sharing your poem will likely help people take emotions and translate them into actions. Well done.

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  28. Happy new year! Wishing you the best in 2016!

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