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How crazy I’m for you

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Why are you failing to read my silence?

Why don’t you know how crazy I’m for you?

Why don’t you feel that possessiveness upon me?

 

I become weak when you avoid me

I become mad and sad when my love is denied

I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.

 

Is it my fault to place myself in you?

Is it my possessiveness which enigmas me?

Is it my failure to let you know my unspoken love?

 

I can’t withstand this anymore

I can’t ever be myself without you in me

I can’t ever live without that craziness in me.

 

love

 

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Author: Akhila

An emotionally colored and emotionally neutral woman flying across the space between words and whipping up whimsical waves of notion to discern the quantum code of her soul.

111 thoughts on “How crazy I’m for you

  1. Happy new year! Wishing you the best in 2016!

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  2. Powerfully written with strong emotions. These sentiments are real and experienced by so many people. Sharing your poem will likely help people take emotions and translate them into actions. Well done.

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  3. Those flowers in the snap! “Chethi poo” right?! 🙂

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  4. Wonderfully expressed, Akhila 🙂

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  5. I hope you had a great new year! 🙂

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  6. Nice one, loved the verse “I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.”

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  7. This is intense…that’s a good thing…

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  8. Lovely love poem Akhila!!!

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  9. Perfectly described feeling of love in poetry

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  10. Crazy kiya re!…Intense emotions…

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  11. Beautifully done dear!! ❤️❤️

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  12. Good work, very meaningful. I get what you are saying. Investing your self into the life of another, yet no commitment has been established, and no true ritual of communication.

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  13. Is it meant to be ‘I’m’ or ‘I am’? Just wondering as I found this a distraction that took me away from your poem. I too have been crazy in love 🙂 Jx

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  15. Two edged sword here I believe…..

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  17. Beautiful poem, Akhila 🙂 I wish you a year full of love so, I´ve nominated you for The One Lovely Blog Award. You can check the rules in my post 🙂 https://chapeblog.wordpress.com/2016/01/08/one-lovely-blog-award/

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  18. Can’t be better than this.
    It’s Akhila who can complie such beautiful words and create awesome poem.

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  19. This is a beautiful poem ❤

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  20. Thank you for following my blog.

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  21. That’s some deep stuff in the end, man ! (Y)

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  22. Very deep and extraordinary feeling. It may also require deep patience.

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  23. Your writings are always deep! 🙂 and that flower, we call it thechi.
    Did I just find a malayalee?? 😀 I’m new around here and you’re the first malayalee on my list!

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    • Thanks a lot for thinking about me.
      But recently I made my blog an award free one. So I hope you will excuse me if I don’t participate in this..once again thank you so much for your consideration

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  25. This is so very romantic and yet poignant…just loved it… 🙂 Wonderfully penned…

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  26. beautifully written…. really enjoyed it.

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  27. This ecstatically romantic , so powerful emotions read it again but loved repeating.

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  28. If felt this exact way about someone before. Every line is understood on a soul level. ❤

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