Words and Notion

Words Whipping up Whimsical Waves of Notion

How crazy I’m for you

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Why are you failing to read my silence?

Why don’t you know how crazy I’m for you?

Why don’t you feel that possessiveness upon me?

 

I become weak when you avoid me

I become mad and sad when my love is denied

I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.

 

Is it my fault to place myself in you?

Is it my possessiveness which enigmas me?

Is it my failure to let you know my unspoken love?

 

I can’t withstand this anymore

I can’t ever be myself without you in me

I can’t ever live without that craziness in me.

 

love

 

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Author: Akhila

An emotionally colored and emotionally neutral woman flying across the space between words and whipping up whimsical waves of notion to discern the quantum code of her soul.

111 thoughts on “How crazy I’m for you”

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  1. Arcane Owl
    January 6, 2016 at 4:26 pm

    Happy new year! Wishing you the best in 2016!

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  2. jncthedc
    January 6, 2016 at 4:41 pm

    Powerfully written with strong emotions. These sentiments are real and experienced by so many people. Sharing your poem will likely help people take emotions and translate them into actions. Well done.

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  3. Visakha
    January 6, 2016 at 4:56 pm

    Those flowers in the snap! “Chethi poo” right?! 🙂

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  4. SumitOfficial
    January 6, 2016 at 5:26 pm

    Wonderfully expressed, Akhila 🙂

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  10. Opinionated Man
    January 7, 2016 at 3:31 am

    I hope you had a great new year! 🙂

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  11. thecucumbercity
    January 7, 2016 at 6:12 am

    Nice one, loved the verse “I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.”

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  12. robertmgoldstein
    January 7, 2016 at 6:20 am

    This is intense…that’s a good thing…

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  13. bisimodupe1975
    January 7, 2016 at 12:23 pm

    Lovely love poem Akhila!!!

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  14. Kishan Thakar
    January 7, 2016 at 1:29 pm

    Perfectly described feeling of love in poetry

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  15. Mann Kaundal
    January 7, 2016 at 1:50 pm

    Crazy kiya re!…Intense emotions…

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  17. noorainsobiya
    January 7, 2016 at 9:06 pm

    Beautifully done dear!! ❤️❤️

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  18. ANM7
    January 8, 2016 at 12:13 am

    Good work, very meaningful. I get what you are saying. Investing your self into the life of another, yet no commitment has been established, and no true ritual of communication.

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  20. Jodine
    January 8, 2016 at 6:12 am

    Is it meant to be ‘I’m’ or ‘I am’? Just wondering as I found this a distraction that took me away from your poem. I too have been crazy in love 🙂 Jx

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  22. 2ndhalfolife
    January 8, 2016 at 9:56 am

    Two edged sword here I believe…..

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  25. chape
    January 8, 2016 at 9:34 pm

    Beautiful poem, Akhila 🙂 I wish you a year full of love so, I´ve nominated you for The One Lovely Blog Award. You can check the rules in my post 🙂 https://chapeblog.wordpress.com/2016/01/08/one-lovely-blog-award/

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  27. Nisthur Anadi
    January 10, 2016 at 8:13 am

    Can’t be better than this.
    It’s Akhila who can complie such beautiful words and create awesome poem.

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  29. LyfWithEm
    January 12, 2016 at 5:10 pm

    This is a beautiful poem ❤

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  30. frenchc1955
    January 15, 2016 at 4:39 am

    Thank you for following my blog.

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  31. rabiamalik22
    January 16, 2016 at 3:47 pm

    That’s some deep stuff in the end, man ! (Y)

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  32. akeem54
    January 17, 2016 at 3:27 pm

    Very deep and extraordinary feeling. It may also require deep patience.

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  33. aishahnaaz
    January 19, 2016 at 5:17 am

    Your writings are always deep! 🙂 and that flower, we call it thechi.
    Did I just find a malayalee?? 😀 I’m new around here and you’re the first malayalee on my list!

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    • Akhila
      February 3, 2016 at 8:47 am

      Thanks a lot for thinking about me.
      But recently I made my blog an award free one. So I hope you will excuse me if I don’t participate in this..once again thank you so much for your consideration

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  35. Maniparna Sengupta Majumder
    February 5, 2016 at 11:25 pm

    This is so very romantic and yet poignant…just loved it… 🙂 Wonderfully penned…

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  36. myheartbeats4ublog
    May 13, 2016 at 2:20 pm

    beautifully written…. really enjoyed it.

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  37. Nisthur Anadi
    July 15, 2016 at 12:07 pm

    This ecstatically romantic , so powerful emotions read it again but loved repeating.

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  38. K. Bellamy with a Purpose
    August 11, 2016 at 4:30 am

    If felt this exact way about someone before. Every line is understood on a soul level. ❤

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