Why are you failing to read my silence?
Why don’t you know how crazy I’m for you?
Why don’t you feel that possessiveness upon me?
I become weak when you avoid me
I become mad and sad when my love is denied
I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.
Is it my fault to place myself in you?
Is it my possessiveness which enigmas me?
Is it my failure to let you know my unspoken love?
I can’t withstand this anymore
I can’t ever be myself without you in me
I can’t ever live without that craziness in me.
September 27, 2016 at 1:20 pm
Intense emotions akhila
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September 27, 2016 at 2:01 pm
oh.. thank you dear..
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August 11, 2016 at 4:30 am
If felt this exact way about someone before. Every line is understood on a soul level. ❤
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August 11, 2016 at 9:04 am
why before.. not now feeling so..?
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August 11, 2016 at 11:14 am
Feeling more love than ever before. But, I can express my love openly and freely so I don’t feel as tired. Although, I am aiming at expressing my love even more openly, and freely in the physical.
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July 15, 2016 at 12:07 pm
This ecstatically romantic , so powerful emotions read it again but loved repeating.
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July 15, 2016 at 3:16 pm
thanks a lot..love is always powerful..
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July 15, 2016 at 3:43 pm
Yeah agreed
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May 13, 2016 at 2:20 pm
beautifully written…. really enjoyed it.
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May 13, 2016 at 4:00 pm
glad that you liked it…
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February 5, 2016 at 11:25 pm
This is so very romantic and yet poignant…just loved it… 🙂 Wonderfully penned…
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February 6, 2016 at 3:52 am
Thank you so much. I am very glad with your words. When heart speaks, naturally it becomes romantic..:)
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February 6, 2016 at 6:46 pm
True that… 🙂
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February 3, 2016 at 8:47 am
Thanks a lot for thinking about me.
But recently I made my blog an award free one. So I hope you will excuse me if I don’t participate in this..once again thank you so much for your consideration
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January 19, 2016 at 5:17 am
Your writings are always deep! 🙂 and that flower, we call it thechi.
Did I just find a malayalee?? 😀 I’m new around here and you’re the first malayalee on my list!
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January 19, 2016 at 4:30 pm
Oh..really. so I am that lucky gal to be first on your malayalee bloggers list. Are u living in Kerala
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January 19, 2016 at 4:43 pm
Yeah! 🙂 if you think that’s lucky 😉
Yah. I’m living in Kerala.
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January 20, 2016 at 4:23 am
in calicut..?
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January 20, 2016 at 4:46 am
Yah!! True blue Kozhikoden 😉
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January 20, 2016 at 5:49 am
me too from calicut..:)
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January 20, 2016 at 6:18 am
Aaha! 😀
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January 19, 2016 at 4:31 pm
Yeah, we too call it thechi
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January 17, 2016 at 3:27 pm
Very deep and extraordinary feeling. It may also require deep patience.
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January 17, 2016 at 3:42 pm
You said it right. Thanks a lot for understanding. ..☺
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January 16, 2016 at 3:47 pm
That’s some deep stuff in the end, man ! (Y)
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January 16, 2016 at 3:49 pm
Thank you for your comment friend. Have a great time
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January 15, 2016 at 4:39 am
Thank you for following my blog.
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January 15, 2016 at 6:06 am
infact i was.. somehow it became not-followed. so did it again..:)
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January 12, 2016 at 5:10 pm
This is a beautiful poem ❤
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January 13, 2016 at 4:15 am
oh.. I am so glad that you found it beautiful.. thanks a lot friend.. have a good day!!
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January 11, 2016 at 11:44 am
This is perfect, Akhila ❤
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January 11, 2016 at 4:35 pm
Thanks a ton. It means a lot
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January 10, 2016 at 8:13 am
Can’t be better than this.
It’s Akhila who can complie such beautiful words and create awesome poem.
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January 10, 2016 at 8:14 am
oh.. that’s such a lovely comment.. I am flattered.. thanks a lot..
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January 10, 2016 at 8:16 am
Is it ? That’s so nice of you !
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January 10, 2016 at 8:23 am
☺
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January 9, 2016 at 3:11 pm
Keep writing!!!!
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January 9, 2016 at 4:03 pm
Thank you
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January 8, 2016 at 9:34 pm
Beautiful poem, Akhila 🙂 I wish you a year full of love so, I´ve nominated you for The One Lovely Blog Award. You can check the rules in my post 🙂 https://chapeblog.wordpress.com/2016/01/08/one-lovely-blog-award/
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January 9, 2016 at 8:20 am
Oh.. Thank you David…
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January 9, 2016 at 8:24 am
You are very welcome 🙂
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January 8, 2016 at 3:29 pm
wow! i love this
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January 8, 2016 at 3:59 pm
Thank you. I am glad that you liked it
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January 8, 2016 at 9:56 am
Two edged sword here I believe…..
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January 8, 2016 at 10:34 am
hmm.. true. happy that you understood.. 🙂
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January 8, 2016 at 6:12 am
Is it meant to be ‘I’m’ or ‘I am’? Just wondering as I found this a distraction that took me away from your poem. I too have been crazy in love 🙂 Jx
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January 8, 2016 at 6:14 am
I’m..
same pinch on the crazy love 😉
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January 8, 2016 at 6:15 am
Aaah I see 🙂
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January 8, 2016 at 6:14 am
I am..
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January 8, 2016 at 6:16 am
Yes that looks and reads better but it’s your poem so it can be whatever you want it to be. Jx
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January 8, 2016 at 6:17 am
🙂 🙂
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January 8, 2016 at 12:40 am
bohat zabrdast tha
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January 8, 2016 at 5:11 am
shukriya…:)
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January 8, 2016 at 10:51 pm
🙂
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January 8, 2016 at 12:13 am
Good work, very meaningful. I get what you are saying. Investing your self into the life of another, yet no commitment has been established, and no true ritual of communication.
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January 8, 2016 at 5:13 am
yeah.. you said it.. thank you..:)
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January 7, 2016 at 9:06 pm
Beautifully done dear!! ❤️❤️
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January 8, 2016 at 5:13 am
thanks a ton dear friend..:)
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January 8, 2016 at 2:34 pm
Well deserved Hun! 😘😘
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January 8, 2016 at 4:00 pm
Oh.. I am blessed with your words sobiya
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January 7, 2016 at 5:53 pm
Very impressive!! 😀
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January 8, 2016 at 5:15 am
really… 🙂 thank you so much. I ma happy that you liked it.. Have a great time..
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January 7, 2016 at 1:50 pm
Crazy kiya re!…Intense emotions…
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January 7, 2016 at 3:20 pm
Ha…thanks..emotions acha hei na?
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January 8, 2016 at 2:23 pm
Bilkul…emotion bhi achhe he or emotions ke expression bhi.:)
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January 8, 2016 at 4:02 pm
Ahhh…so nice comment 😊
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January 7, 2016 at 1:29 pm
Perfectly described feeling of love in poetry
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January 7, 2016 at 3:20 pm
Thank you kishan. .
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January 7, 2016 at 12:23 pm
Lovely love poem Akhila!!!
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January 7, 2016 at 3:29 pm
Thanks a lot for your kind words.
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January 7, 2016 at 6:20 am
This is intense…that’s a good thing…
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January 7, 2016 at 6:34 am
Thanks Robert..yeah.. it is intense
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January 7, 2016 at 6:12 am
Nice one, loved the verse “I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.”
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January 7, 2016 at 7:20 am
thanks friend..:)
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January 7, 2016 at 7:32 am
Sooooo Intense 😦 ?
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January 7, 2016 at 7:33 am
🙂
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January 7, 2016 at 3:31 am
I hope you had a great new year! 🙂
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January 7, 2016 at 6:35 am
Thanks Jason.. Yeah.. Having a great new year.. 😉
Wish you too a wonderful new year..
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January 6, 2016 at 6:39 pm
Very good.
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January 7, 2016 at 7:32 am
Thank you so much for your kind words. Have a great day.!
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January 7, 2016 at 8:26 am
🙂
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January 6, 2016 at 6:12 pm
Nalla Varikal
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January 7, 2016 at 7:32 am
Thanks a ton Aneesh..
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January 7, 2016 at 8:01 am
Seems that you are one crazy lover!!
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January 7, 2016 at 8:02 am
ha ha.. secret…shhhhh….
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January 6, 2016 at 6:03 pm
Good one 🙂
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January 7, 2016 at 7:34 am
Thank you Nabeel.. Have a great day..
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January 6, 2016 at 5:42 pm
Intense!
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January 7, 2016 at 7:34 am
Thank you Swetha..:)
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January 6, 2016 at 5:28 pm
amazing
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January 7, 2016 at 7:35 am
Thank you Pinky..:)
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January 6, 2016 at 5:26 pm
Wonderfully expressed, Akhila 🙂
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January 7, 2016 at 7:35 am
Thank you Sumit 🙂
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January 7, 2016 at 9:05 am
You’re welcome 🙂
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January 6, 2016 at 4:56 pm
Those flowers in the snap! “Chethi poo” right?! 🙂
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January 7, 2016 at 7:36 am
oh.. Yea.. You identified it, Visakha.. flowers in the garden at my home 🙂
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January 7, 2016 at 7:38 am
😀 We got plenty of those short shrubs around our lawn too! 🙂
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January 7, 2016 at 7:39 am
oh.. really.. I like them a lot.. easily maintainable too.. where are you living..?
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January 7, 2016 at 7:39 am
Cochin. 🙂
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January 7, 2016 at 7:40 am
oh.. okay..
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January 7, 2016 at 11:28 am
We call it “Thechi” 🙂
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January 7, 2016 at 3:30 pm
Yeah. .we too call it thechi
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January 7, 2016 at 3:32 pm
Aah! Malayalam-Tamil differences!! 🙂
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January 6, 2016 at 4:41 pm
Powerfully written with strong emotions. These sentiments are real and experienced by so many people. Sharing your poem will likely help people take emotions and translate them into actions. Well done.
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January 7, 2016 at 7:37 am
Thank you so much.. You are really inspiring me to write more..:) thanks again
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January 6, 2016 at 4:26 pm
Happy new year! Wishing you the best in 2016!
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January 6, 2016 at 4:27 pm
Thanks a lot.. wish you a wonderful new year
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January 6, 2016 at 4:34 pm
🙂
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